Common mistake
Mentioning punishment, education, and jobs briefly can become a generic solution list.
- Whether the cause is specific
- Whether the solution matches the cause
- Whether the mechanism is explained
Writing topic breakdown
Crime topics must separate cause and solution first.
Turn topics, samples, materials, or prediction prompts into task reading, development, examples, and revision steps first. The goal is not memorising answers; it is writing your own next version.
A topic page is useful when it helps you write your own next version.
Diagnostic evidence
If the solution does not answer the earlier cause, the problem-solution structure breaks.
What to confirm before writing
Write one crime cause first, then choose the matching prevention or punishment action.
What to revise in the next version
Turn a generic solution into actor-mechanism-result.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
FAQ
What problem does Crime topic Chinese solve?
Turn topics, samples, materials, or prediction prompts into task reading, development, examples, and revision steps first. The goal is not memorising answers; it is writing your own next version.
What evidence should I check first for Crime topic Chinese?
If the solution does not answer the earlier cause, the problem-solution structure breaks.
What should I redo after reading Crime topic Chinese?
Write one crime cause first, then choose the matching prevention or punishment action. Mentioning punishment, education, and jobs briefly can become a generic solution list.
Is Crime topic Chinese an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
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Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Crime topic
IELTS Task 2 crime topic 容易写成 punishment 清单。先诊断原因、责任主体和 solution 机制。
Crime prevention education
Crime prevention through education 题目不能只写教育重要。先诊断 risk group、school action 和 behaviour change。
Crime generic solution
一个 IELTS Task 2 crime 常见写作问题：不写范文，展示 solution 太泛时的证据和修改目标。
Chinese Task 2 development
雅思大作文展开薄时，不要只补例子。先诊断 claim、reason、example 和 consequence 是否连成一条链。
Discuss both views sample
雅思大作文讨论双方范文应分析两个观点、个人立场和评价标准，避免只罗列双方理由。
Education essay
雅思大作文教育类作文要先判断责任主体和教育目标，再选择课程、费用、家长或学生例子。
Start diagnosis
Verify the issue with one essay first.
Put the prompt and essay into assessment and first check whether the topic material truly supports your point.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References