离目标分差的每 0.5，都有具体原因。 先看清丢分在哪，再修掉最关键的卡分点。
首考还是刷分，第一步都一样：免费诊断一篇 Task 2，给出保守分数区间、主卡分点和原文证据。看完再决定要不要开始 31 天冲刺。
约 40 分钟 · 一篇 Task 2 初稿
第一步：交一篇 Task 2 初稿，拿到这份完整测评
Some people believe that technological advancements have made our lives simpler and more convenient, while others argue that these developments have led to a loss of important life skills. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the development of science and technology, our life has changed a lot. Some people think technology makes our life more simple and convenient, but others believe people are losing many important life skills because of it. Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, technology brings more advantages than disadvantages. First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who is far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do it easily. However, some people point out that we are losing some skills. For example, many young people cannot cook, cannot read a paper map, and even cannot write Chinese characters correctly because they always type on the phone. My cousin is a good example, he cannot go anywhere without navigation. If one day the phone is no electricity, maybe we cannot do anything. What is more, technology also makes people lazy in thinking. When we meet a problem, we search the answer on the Internet directly instead of thinking by ourselves. Some students even use AI to write their homework, so their writing skill becomes worse and worse. In conclusion, technology indeed makes our life simple and convenient, but it also brings some problems. I think we should use technology in a proper way and do not depend on it too much.
高亮句是报告中的原文证据；点击右侧报告里的证据可以定位到这里。
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Start the target blocker body paragraph with one sentence that names its job.
Clear paragraph roles make the argument easier to follow without adding a full new essay.
Choose one precise academic collocation for the central claim and reuse it consistently.
Precise wording reduces examiner doubt about the logic of the argument.
Fix the article/preposition pattern in one weak sentence before rewriting more content.
Language control should stop distracting the examiner from the idea you are trying to prove.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who is far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do it easily.
- • Start the target blocker body paragraph with one sentence that names its job.
- • Keep the paragraph focused on the same claim.
- • Use your own wording; do not copy a model answer.
Start the target blocker body paragraph with one sentence that names its job.
诊断 → 修复 → 重写 → 重写证据。
把你的作文完整批改一遍，每个结论都有据可依，而不是一个笼统的分数。
就是上面这份真实测评：保守的分数区间，并标出拖低分数的评分项。
Tutor 分步带你修：一次只修一个卡分点，先写两三句证明能修掉，再逐项检查通过标准。
保留不需要改的内容，把刚修过的卡分点落实到整篇作文。
只比较目标卡分点的重写证据，不等同于真实 IELTS 提分。
以上面的样例为例，报告给出的下一步修复任务：Start the target blocker body paragraph with one sentence that names its job.
把同一套修复流程，跑满一整个月。
每天针对真实卡分点做定向修复、限时重写，并查看只针对目标卡分点的重写证据；先在免费诊断里确认值得，再开始。