收到一页批改,还是不知道下一步先练什么。
每条建议看起来都重要,报告解释了哪里不好,却没有告诉你下一步只做什么。
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作文已经写了,反馈可能也拿到了。现在缺的是:先改哪一处,以及改完怎么判断有没有改对。
批注:反馈只有变成你自己的下一次写作动作,才真正有用。每条建议看起来都重要,报告解释了哪里不好,却没有告诉你下一步只做什么。
看懂反馈,不等于下次能靠自己写出来。中间缺的是一次真正动手修改。
没有聚焦的前后对比,写得更多,也可能只是把原来的问题再写一遍。
不是模板反馈——每一项评分,都对应你原文里的句子。
“First of all, technology saves”卡分点证据就落在这句原文里
让读者先看懂这一段负责说明什么,再进入例子。
Some people believe that technological advancements have made our lives simpler and more convenient, while others argue that these developments have led to a loss of important life skills. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the development of science and technology, our life has changed a lot. Some people think technology makes our life more simple and convenient, but others believe people are losing many important life skills because of it. Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, technology brings more advantages than disadvantages.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who is far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do it easily.
However, some people point out that we are losing some skills. For example, many young people cannot cook, cannot read a paper map, and even cannot write Chinese characters correctly because they always type on the phone. My cousin is a good example, he cannot go anywhere without navigation. If one day the phone is no electricity, maybe we cannot do anything.
What is more, technology also makes people lazy in thinking. When we meet a problem, we search the answer on the Internet directly instead of thinking by ourselves. Some students even use AI to write their homework, so their writing skill becomes worse and worse.
In conclusion, technology indeed makes our life simple and convenient, but it also brings some problems. I think we should use technology in a proper way and do not depend on it too much.
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