公开样例来自同一篇已发布 Task 2 作文：四维分项、原文证据、约 8 分钟的 60–180 词目标重写，以及五档前后对比结果连续展示。
分数区间仅作诊断参考，不是雅思官方成绩；页面不承诺提分。
你会先看到主卡分点对应的原文位置，再看到 AI 为内测流程生成、由内测账号按同一目标提交的修订段。
判定保留 before/after 摘要和证据引用，方便核对结论从哪里来。
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who is far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do it easily.
On the one hand, technology has made our daily life much simpler and more convenient in many ways. First of all, it saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who are far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do them easily.
Body paragraph role is unclear
让读者先看懂这一段负责说明什么，再进入例子。
这个问题有改善
The submitted revision successfully added a clear topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph ('On the one hand, technology has made our daily life much simpler and more convenient in many ways.') that explicitly states the paragraph's role in addressing the first view of the prompt.
The original paragraph began directly with a specific supporting point ('First of all, technology saves a lot of time...') without a broader topic sentence to establish the paragraph's overall role in the essay.
The rewritten paragraph starts with a clear topic sentence that outlines the paragraph's purpose, effectively introducing the discussion on how technology makes life simpler and more convenient before providing specific examples.
先读原文证据和公开修复目标，再比较修订段，不需要猜系统改了什么。
把同样的方法用于自己的一段：定位证据、完成目标重写、查看前后变化。
公开样例来自同一篇已发布 Task 2 作文：四维分项、原文证据、约 8 分钟的 60–180 词目标重写，以及五档前后对比结果连续展示。
你会先看到主卡分点对应的原文位置，再看到 AI 为内测流程生成、由内测账号按同一目标提交的修订段。
判定保留 before/after 摘要和证据引用，方便核对结论从哪里来。 把同样的方法用于自己的一段：定位证据、完成目标重写、查看前后变化。
找出这篇作文中值得优先修改的问题。
这些页面用于补充说明 半分写作 的卡分诊断与修复方法、Task 1 overview、Task 2 展开和常见卡分问题。
提交题目和作文，先拿到主卡分点、原文证据和下一版重写目标。
找出这篇作文中值得优先修改的问题。
