一次诊断给出 TR、CC、LR、GRA 四维分项和字符级原文证据，再生成一个约 8 分钟、60–180 词的目标段落任务，由学习者自己完成。
分数区间仅作诊断参考，不是雅思官方成绩；页面不承诺提分。
页面锁定主卡分点、原文位置和公开修复重点，学习者保留真正的重写动作。
修订使用五档前后对比结果，并保留前后证据，结论可以回到具体原文。
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who is far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do it easily.
On the one hand, technology has made our daily life much simpler and more convenient in many ways. First of all, it saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who are far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do them easily.
Body paragraph role is unclear
让读者先看懂这一段负责说明什么，再进入例子。
这个问题有改善
The submitted revision successfully added a clear topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph ('On the one hand, technology has made our daily life much simpler and more convenient in many ways.') that explicitly states the paragraph's role in addressing the first view of the prompt.
The original paragraph began directly with a specific supporting point ('First of all, technology saves a lot of time...') without a broader topic sentence to establish the paragraph's overall role in the essay.
The rewritten paragraph starts with a clear topic sentence that outlines the paragraph's purpose, effectively introducing the discussion on how technology makes life simpler and more convenient before providing specific examples.
提交真实题目和完整作文，先得到四维诊断与主卡分点。
围绕公开修复目标完成自己的修订段，再比较 before/after 证据。
一次诊断给出 TR、CC、LR、GRA 四维分项和字符级原文证据，再生成一个约 8 分钟、60–180 词的目标段落任务，由学习者自己完成。
页面锁定主卡分点、原文位置和公开修复重点，学习者保留真正的重写动作。
修订使用五档前后对比结果，并保留前后证据，结论可以回到具体原文。 围绕公开修复目标完成自己的修订段，再比较 before/after 证据。
找出这篇作文中值得优先修改的问题。
这些页面用于补充说明 半分写作 的卡分诊断与修复方法、Task 1 overview、Task 2 展开和常见卡分问题。
提交题目和作文，先找主卡分点，再决定下一版该修 Task 1、Task 2、语言控制还是段落展开。
找出这篇作文中值得优先修改的问题。
