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主卡分点、目标段落和公开修复重点放在同一条路线里，你只需完成一次聚焦重写。
围绕公开的修复目标重写目标段落，再用修改前后摘要核对结果。
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who is far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do it easily.
On the one hand, technology has made our daily life much simpler and more convenient in many ways. First of all, it saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friends who are far away from us. These things were very difficult in the past, but now everyone can do them easily.
Body paragraph role is unclear
让读者先看懂这一段负责说明什么，再进入例子。
这个问题有改善
The submitted revision successfully added a clear topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph ('On the one hand, technology has made our daily life much simpler and more convenient in many ways.') that explicitly states the paragraph's role in addressing the first view of the prompt.
The original paragraph began directly with a specific supporting point ('First of all, technology saves a lot of time...') without a broader topic sentence to establish the paragraph's overall role in the essay.
The rewritten paragraph starts with a clear topic sentence that outlines the paragraph's purpose, effectively introducing the discussion on how technology makes life simpler and more convenient before providing specific examples.
修订后用改善、部分改善等五档结果说明目标问题发生了什么变化。
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报告把完整作文拆成 TR、CC、LR、GRA 四维分项，并用原文证据选出一个主卡分点；目标段落用 60–180 词重写，约 8 分钟完成。
主卡分点、目标段落和公开修复重点放在同一条路线里，你只需完成一次聚焦重写。
围绕公开的修复目标重写目标段落，再用修改前后摘要核对结果。 提交完整题目和作文，让诊断同时检查任务回应、连贯、词汇和语法。
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找出这篇作文中值得优先修改的问题。
