Diagnostic evidence
If key words are repeatedly misused or paraphrase changes task meaning, LR holds the essay back.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through rewriting. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.
The more advanced words are forced in, the more likely collocation errors, unnatural register, or task drift appear.
Rewrite sentences containing those key words, fixing meaning and collocation without changing the idea.
If key words are repeatedly misused or paraphrase changes task meaning, LR holds the essay back.
Mark the five key words that must be accurate in this prompt.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.