Diagnostic evidence
If key words are repeatedly misused or paraphrase changes task meaning, LR holds the essay back.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.
The more advanced words are forced in, the more likely collocation errors, unnatural register, or task drift appear.
Rewrite sentences containing those key words, fixing meaning and collocation without changing the idea.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
If key words are repeatedly misused or paraphrase changes task meaning, LR holds the essay back.
Mark the five key words that must be accurate in this prompt.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
The more advanced words are forced in, the more likely collocation errors, unnatural register, or task drift appear.
Rewrite sentences containing those key words, fixing meaning and collocation without changing the idea. Mark the five key words that must be accurate in this prompt.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.