Diagnostic evidence
If the same feedback repeats, rewrite one step first instead of collecting more templates.
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
Position drift is not a sentence problem; the essay standard is unstable.
The issue is usually not a missing model essay; it is not yet seeing why your own essay keeps being called unclear.
Use essay evidence to choose the next revision.
Common risk
The introduction partly agrees, body 1 agrees, body 2 disagrees, and the conclusion shifts to both important.
What to revise after checking
Write one thesis with a comparison standard, then check whether every topic sentence serves it.
Identify the writing problem first
Separate task response, development, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar first. Each writing problem needs its own fix.
- Whether the thesis is clear
- Whether body paragraphs point in one direction
- Whether the conclusion is stable
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时，band、错误清单和自动生成的范文只是表层。检查器应基于题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤；结果是学习诊断，官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场从开头的同意或反对开始，再让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估，观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Money position drift
示范 money and happiness 作文为什么从安全感写到成功再写到道德，导致立场不稳定。重写目标是选择一个 comparison standard 并贯穿全文。
Problem solution sample
雅思问题解决类范文不要只背模板。先把 problem、cause、solution 一一配对，检查方案有没有执行者、动作和结果；再回到自己的原稿，只重写断开的那一组原因—方案。
Task 2 question analysis
雅思大作文审题要先拆题型、命令词、讨论对象和限制条件，避免偏题和立场漂移。先把范文、模板句、审题、逻辑、词汇或语法问题连接到一个可重写验证的步骤。重点不是背一个答案。
Chinese Task 2 question bank
雅思大作文题库要按 topic、question type 和卡分点使用。先诊断题目要求，再写提纲。如果同一类反馈反复出现，就先重写一个步骤，不要继续收集模板。
Start practising
Diagnose one essay and find one main blocker first.
Submit your Task 2 essay and get one piece of diagnostic evidence plus one revision target.
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