Diagnostic evidence
If the same feedback repeats, revise one step first instead of collecting more templates.
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
Position drift is not a sentence problem; the essay standard is unstable.
The issue is usually not a missing model essay; it is not yet seeing why your own essay keeps being called unclear.
Use essay evidence to choose the next revision.
Common risk
The introduction partly agrees, body 1 agrees, body 2 disagrees, and the conclusion shifts to both important.
What to revise after checking
Write one thesis with a comparison standard, then check whether every topic sentence serves it.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Identify the writing problem first
Separate task response, development, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar first. Different writing problems cannot be fixed with one template.
- Whether the thesis is clear
- Whether body paragraphs point in one direction
- Whether the conclusion is stable
FAQ
What problem does Chinese position drift solve?
The issue is usually not a missing model essay; it is not yet seeing why your own essay keeps being called unclear.
What evidence should I check first for Chinese position drift?
The introduction partly agrees, body 1 agrees, body 2 disagrees, and the conclusion shifts to both important.
What should I redo after reading Chinese position drift?
Write one thesis with a comparison standard, then check whether every topic sentence serves it. Separate task response, development, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar first. Different writing problems cannot be fixed with one template.
Is Chinese position drift an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
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These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时，不要只看 band、错误清单或自动生成的范文。检查器应基于题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤；结果是学习诊断，不是官方 IELTS 分数。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场不只是开头写同意或反对，还要让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心不是观点数量，而是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Money position drift
示范 money and happiness 作文为什么从安全感写到成功再写到道德，导致立场不稳定。
Problem solution sample
雅思问题解决类作文先区分 problem、cause 与 solution，再用原因—解决方案矩阵检查配对。每个方案都要写清执行者、行动、机制和预期结果。用范文逻辑反查自己原稿中的论证链断点，锁定最拖分的卡分点，完成一次有针对性的段落重写与对比复盘，在真实写作中检验修改效果，而不是盲目死记硬背整篇范文模板。
Task 2 question analysis
雅思大作文审题要先拆题型、命令词、讨论对象和限制条件，避免偏题和立场漂移。
Chinese Task 2 question bank
雅思大作文题库要按 topic、question type 和卡分点使用。先诊断题目要求，再写提纲。
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