Read the four criteria together
An unstable position may weaken Task Response and make coherence look messy. Inaccurate vocabulary may hurt Lexical Resource and also blur the point.
Criteria hub
IELTS Writing criteria are not a list to memorize; they are a diagnostic map.
The four criteria affect the same essay together. In score-gap repair, the useful step is not memorizing labels; it is finding which criterion limits the next revision.
This page explains diagnostic evidence, not official scoring results.
TR/TA checks task completion
First check whether the response answers the prompt, or whether Task 1 captures the main features.
CC checks idea relationships
Cohesion is not just linking words; it is whether sentences and paragraphs move each other forward.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Turn criteria into revision targets
One repair cycle should focus on one main issue. Identify the criterion first, then choose a short repair step or revision target that can prove change.
- Which criterion limits this essay first
- Where the text evidence sits
- What the next version should prove
FAQ
What problem does Writing criteria solve?
The four criteria affect the same essay together. In score-gap repair, the useful step is not memorizing labels; it is finding which criterion limits the next revision.
What evidence should I check first for Writing criteria?
First check whether the response answers the prompt, or whether Task 1 captures the main features.
What should I redo after reading Writing criteria?
Cohesion is not just linking words; it is whether sentences and paragraphs move each other forward. One repair cycle should focus on one main issue. Identify the criterion first, then choose a short repair step or revision target that can prove change.
Is Writing criteria an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心不是观点数量，而是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Coherence
IELTS Coherence and Cohesion 不只是 linking words。更重要的是观点顺序、段落职责、句子推进和指代是否清楚。
Lexical Resource
IELTS Lexical Resource 不是堆难词。更重要的是词义准确、搭配自然、话题贴合，并且不因为同义替换扭曲题目。
Grammar accuracy
IELTS Grammatical Range and Accuracy 同时考察句型范围与准确控制，不是复杂句越长越好。结合完整段落检查句子边界、时态、主谓一致、从句和标点，优先找反复出现且影响理解的问题。先把失控长句拆开，再重组成清楚的复合句；比较修改前后是否更准确自然，并把仍会复发的一类错误设为下一篇重写目标。
Writing feedback service
IELTS writing feedback service 页面强调证据、主卡分点和修改目标，避免只给笼统建议。
General feedback
IELTS writing feedback too general 时，问题不是没有建议，而是建议没有对应原文证据和下一次可验证的重写步骤。
Grammar accuracy
IELTS Writing 的语法评分看 range 和 accuracy。复杂句如果错误频繁，会比稳定的简单句更影响读者理解。
Start diagnosis
Turn the criteria into one revision step.
Submit one essay and see which criterion most limits the next revision.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References
- IELTS Writing band descriptorsOfficial
- IELTS Academic Writing formatOfficial