A useful introduction does two things
First, keep the core conflict of the prompt. Second, give the answer direction. Polished wording comes after that.
Task 2 introduction
A Task 2 introduction should show how you answer the prompt.
Many introductions only paraphrase the prompt and never show a clear position. The response becomes unstable from the start.
Paraphrase is not the whole introduction.
Position should appear early
The reader should see early whether you agree, disagree, partly agree, or discuss and judge.
Scope should be clear
The introduction should avoid narrowing or shifting the prompt.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to revise after checking
If the introduction is unclear, write three versions: agree, partly agree, discuss and judge. Compare which one covers the prompt best.
- Whether the paraphrase distorts the prompt
- Whether a position is visible
- Whether the body direction is clear
FAQ
What problem does Task 2 intro solve?
Many introductions only paraphrase the prompt and never show a clear position. The response becomes unstable from the start.
What evidence should I check first for Task 2 intro?
The reader should see early whether you agree, disagree, partly agree, or discuss and judge.
What should I redo after reading Task 2 intro?
The introduction should avoid narrowing or shifting the prompt. If the introduction is unclear, write three versions: agree, partly agree, discuss and judge. Compare which one covers the prompt best.
Is Task 2 intro an AI essay checker?
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Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场不只是开头写同意或反对，还要让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心不是观点数量，而是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Task 2 paraphrasing
IELTS Task 2 paraphrasing 的风险不是词不够高级，而是机械同义替换改变题目范围、立场对象或核心冲突。
Task 2 checker
IELTS Task 2 essay checker 应结合题目和作文检查回应覆盖、立场、功能与论证链，而不是只改语法或替换高级词。对照 TR、CC、LR 和 GRA 找出最影响目标分的一项，引用原文证据，再把问题收窄成一个 reason、example 或 consequence 的段落重写，比较修改前后是否更完整。
No ideas
IELTS Task 2 没思路时，不要马上背观点库或套万能素材。先拆清题目命令词、讨论对象、冲突关系、责任主体和回答要求，再把任务分配成明确的主体段职责。用 who、why、how、result 追问生成可解释的理由与例子，并检查它们是否真正服务立场；最后把审题或展开中的主卡点转成一次段落重写步骤。
Opinion essay
IELTS Task 2 opinion essay 要先判断 agree/disagree 的程度、反方处理和主体段证明链。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
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Check whether the introduction stabilizes the answer direction.
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