Diagnostic evidence
If the paraphrase cannot map back to the original prompt item by item, Task Response is at risk.
Writing problem breakdown
The first requirement of prompt paraphrase is preserving meaning.
Break the problem into one blocker, one piece of diagnostic evidence, and one next revision target first. The smaller the problem, the more focused the rewrite becomes.
Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.
Common mistake
Changing words just to avoid repetition can alter the prompt object or scope.
What to revise in the next version
Compare the introduction paraphrase against the prompt and check whether any object was lost.
What to confirm before writing
Keep core nouns and limits first, changing only expression.
- Whether objects are preserved
- Whether scope is preserved
- Whether synonyms are accurate
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese writing paraphrase
雅思大作文题目改写不只是同义替换。先保留限定词、讨论对象、强度和评价关系，再调整句式，避免 paraphrase 后偏题或改变立场要求。只改句式，不改核心名词和逻辑关系。
Task 2 paraphrasing
IELTS Task 2 paraphrasing 的风险在于机械同义替换改变题目范围、立场对象或核心冲突，词高级与否是其次。准确改写比花哨改写更重要。
IELTS Writing off-topic
雅思写作偏题常来自忽略命令词、话题范围或比较对象。先检查题目回应，再改语言。先把问题拆成一个卡分点、一条诊断证据和一个下一版重写目标。问题越小，重写越容易真正聚焦。
Chinese writing practice online
雅思写作在线练习不要只刷题。先找主卡分点，再用重写和短修复把卡分点变成可追踪的证据变化。先判断写作步骤哪里断了，再决定下一次重写。这里不提供可背范文，也不把反馈降级成泛泛改错。
Writing practice website
选择雅思写作练习网站时，不只看题目数量，还要看是否能诊断主卡分点并安排重写。先把练习、评分、批改或工具结果接到一篇真实作文的诊断和下一版重写。入口越多，越需要一个清楚的主卡分点。
Writing preparation
雅思写作备考应先诊断当前主卡分点，再安排 Task 1、Task 2、语言和重写训练。如果一周练了很多题但没有重写，备考效率通常偏低。每周安排一次完整作文、两次短修复和一次重写。
Start practising
Use one real essay to find the main blocker.
Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.
References