Common mistake
Only writing cities are crowded blends housing, transport, jobs, and public services into one vague claim.
Task 2 topic breakdown
Urbanisation essays need specific problems.
Break the Task 2 topic into command words, subjects, actors, example scope, and scoreable body development first. The focus is not memorising one universal example.
Topic pages should narrow the thinking space, not generate a whole model essay for you.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Diagnostic evidence
If the problem lacks location, affected group, and cause, the solution cannot match well.
What to confirm before writing
Decide whether the prompt asks about rural migration, housing, congestion, high-rise living, or city health.
How to revise the next version
Turn one city problem into a cause-effect-solution chain.
- Whether city problem is specific
- Whether affected group is clear
- Whether solution matches cause
FAQ
What problem does Urbanisation essay solve?
Break the Task 2 topic into command words, subjects, actors, example scope, and scoreable body development first. The focus is not memorising one universal example.
Is Urbanisation essay an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
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Task 2 hot topics
雅思大作文高频话题适合整理观点框架、常见立场和可复用例子，但不能替代审题。
Task 2 question analysis
雅思大作文审题要先拆题型、命令词、讨论对象和限制条件，避免偏题和立场漂移。
Task 2 sample essay
雅思大作文范文要重点分析立场稳定、主体段展开和例子如何支撑观点。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Urbanisation topic
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic 容易泛写 big cities。先诊断人口迁移、住房、就业和公共服务压力。
Rural to urban migration
农村到城市迁移题要诊断工作机会、公共服务和农村地区影响，不要只写 people move to cities。
Urbanisation vague problem
示范 urbanisation essay 把城市问题写成清单时，如何缩小到住房或公共服务压力。
Work essay
雅思大作文工作类作文要分析远程办公、四天工作制、职业教育和就业变化的具体影响。
Advantages disadvantages sample
雅思大作文优缺点范文不该只平均罗列 advantages 和 disadvantages。先识别题目是否要求 outweigh，再检查范文的比较标准、段落权重、理由与例子如何支撑结论。用这些证据反查自己的提纲和主体段，找出立场或展开中的主卡分点，完成一次有目标的段落重写，而不是背诵整篇答案，并检验修改效果。
Agree disagree sample
雅思大作文同意不同意范文要重点分析立场、让步和主体段是否都服务同一个观点。
Start diagnosis
Turn the topic into scoreable argument actions first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect prompt analysis, position, body development, examples, and scoring criteria first, then decide whether to add ideas, replace examples, or rewrite a paragraph.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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