Banfen Writing
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Chinese writing problem diagnosis

Topic vocabulary needs task fit before advanced words.

The issue is usually not a missing model essay; it is not yet seeing why your own essay keeps being called unclear.

Use essay evidence to choose the next revision.

Diagnostic evidence

If the same feedback repeats, rewrite one step first instead of collecting more templates.

Identify the writing problem first

Separate task response, development, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar first. Each writing problem needs its own fix.

What to revise after checking

Replace one advanced word with a clearer actor, action, or result, then check whether the paragraph is clearer.

Common risk

Many essays use globalisation, innovation, and well-being, but the words do not move the argument.

  • Whether the word is accurate
  • Whether the word serves argument
  • Whether collocation is natural
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时,band、错误清单和自动生成的范文只是表层。检查器应基于题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤;结果是学习诊断,官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Lexical Resource
IELTS Lexical Resource 看的是用词准确,难词多少是其次。更重要的是词义准确、搭配自然、话题贴合,同义替换也要守住题目原意。
Vocabulary control
IELTS Writing 的 Lexical Resource 看词义、搭配、语域和准确性。高级词数量只是其中一小部分;用错的难词,比简单准确的词更伤分。
Globalisation topic
IELTS Task 2 globalisation topic 容易写成世界变小了。先诊断文化、经济和个人选择之间的影响链。先诊断题目角度,再决定例子。
July 2026 Task 2 recalls
整理 2026 年 7 月近期公开雅思大作文考题回忆,涵盖英语授课、日常活动压力和公共场所手机使用三类题目。页面区分回忆题干与官方原题,列出题型判断、公开来源和可能的命令词拆解;每道题只提供审题与下一版主体段重写目标,帮助你练习立场、责任边界和展开链,不把考生回忆包装成已核实真题或任何形式的押题保证。
Task 2 topic prediction
雅思大作文预测不能只背题。更有用的是把高频话题拆成题型、立场、理由和例子。先把话题、范文、素材或预测题转成审题、展开、例子和重写步骤。重点不是背答案,而是写出自己的下一版。
Transport essay
雅思大作文交通类作文常讨论公共交通、私家车、拥堵、道路投资、票价与政府政策。先明确受影响群体、执行主体和评价标准,再解释措施如何改变出行行为、成本与环境结果。通过常见空泛方案检查 claim、reason、example 和 consequence 是否完整,把最薄弱的政策机制或比较关系转成下一版可验证的段落重写。
Start practising

Diagnose one essay and find one main blocker first.

Submit your Task 2 essay and get one piece of diagnostic evidence plus one revision target.