Common risk
Many essays use globalisation, innovation, and well-being, but the words do not move the argument.
- Whether the word is accurate
- Whether the word serves argument
- Whether collocation is natural
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
Topic vocabulary needs task fit before advanced words.
The issue is usually not a missing model essay; it is not yet seeing why your own essay keeps being called unclear.
Use essay evidence to choose the next revision.
Diagnostic evidence
If the same feedback repeats, revise one step first instead of collecting more templates.
Identify the writing problem first
Separate task response, development, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar first. Different writing problems cannot be fixed with one template.
What to revise after checking
Replace one advanced word with a clearer actor, action, or result, then check whether the paragraph is clearer.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
FAQ
What problem does Chinese topic vocabulary solve?
The issue is usually not a missing model essay; it is not yet seeing why your own essay keeps being called unclear.
What evidence should I check first for Chinese topic vocabulary?
If the same feedback repeats, revise one step first instead of collecting more templates.
What should I redo after reading Chinese topic vocabulary?
Separate task response, development, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar first. Different writing problems cannot be fixed with one template. Many essays use globalisation, innovation, and well-being, but the words do not move the argument.
Is Chinese topic vocabulary an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时，不要只看 band、错误清单或自动生成的范文。检查器应基于题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤；结果是学习诊断，不是官方 IELTS 分数。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Lexical Resource
IELTS Lexical Resource 不是堆难词。更重要的是词义准确、搭配自然、话题贴合，并且不因为同义替换扭曲题目。
Vocabulary control
IELTS Writing 的 Lexical Resource 看词义、搭配、语域和准确性。高级词数量只是其中一小部分；不会用的词比简单准确的词更危险。
Globalisation topic
IELTS Task 2 globalisation topic 容易写成世界变小了。先诊断文化、经济和个人选择之间的影响链。
July 2026 Task 2 recalls
整理 2026 年 7 月近期公开雅思大作文考题回忆，涵盖英语授课、日常活动压力和公共场所手机使用三类题目。页面区分回忆题干与官方原题，列出题型判断、公开来源和可能的命令词拆解；每道题只提供审题与下一版主体段重写目标，帮助你练习立场、责任边界和展开链，不把考生回忆包装成已核实真题或任何形式的押题保证。
Task 2 topic prediction
雅思大作文预测不能只背题。更有用的是把高频话题拆成题型、立场、理由和例子。
Transport essay
雅思大作文交通类作文常讨论公共交通、私家车、拥堵、道路投资、票价与政府政策。先明确受影响群体、执行主体和评价标准，再解释措施如何改变出行行为、成本与环境结果。通过常见空泛方案检查 claim、reason、example 和 consequence 是否完整，把最薄弱的政策机制或比较关系转成下一版可验证的段落重写。
Start diagnosis
Diagnose one essay and find one main blocker first.
Submit your Task 2 essay and get one piece of diagnostic evidence plus one revision target.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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