Common risk
Many essays use globalisation, innovation, and well-being, but the words do not move the argument.
- Whether the word is accurate
- Whether the word serves argument
- Whether collocation is natural
The issue is usually not a missing model essay; it is not yet seeing why your own essay keeps being called unclear.
Use essay evidence to choose the next revision.
If the same feedback repeats, rewrite one step first instead of collecting more templates.
Separate task response, development, coherence, vocabulary, and grammar first. Each writing problem needs its own fix.
Replace one advanced word with a clearer actor, action, or result, then check whether the paragraph is clearer.
Many essays use globalisation, innovation, and well-being, but the words do not move the argument.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit your Task 2 essay and get one piece of diagnostic evidence plus one revision target.