Common mistake
Memorising Task 2 samples can ignore question type and command words, causing wrong structure next time.
Writing topic breakdown
Task 2 samples should be broken into argument chains.
Turn topics, samples, materials, or prediction prompts into task reading, development, examples, and revision steps first. The goal is not memorising answers; it is writing your own next version.
A topic page is useful when it helps you write your own next version.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Diagnostic evidence
If you cannot find each paragraph’s reason and so what, the sample was read but not analysed.
What to confirm before writing
Mark question type, position, two body paragraph roles, and each example.
What to revise in the next version
Use the same structure to write an outline for a new topic and test understanding.
- Whether position is clear
- Whether the chain is complete
- Whether structure can transfer
FAQ
What problem does Task 2 sample essay analysis solve?
Turn topics, samples, materials, or prediction prompts into task reading, development, examples, and revision steps first. The goal is not memorising answers; it is writing your own next version.
Is Task 2 sample essay analysis an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
雅思写作批改看懂了，下一篇还是不会改？提交一篇真实 IELTS Task 2，先看保守参考分数区间、主卡分点和原文证据；由你自己重写一段、完成整篇第二稿，再对比修改前后变化。首次合格诊断免费；确认确有主卡分点后，可一次性选择 7 天 ¥29 或 31 天 ¥99 写作修复期，一次只进行 1 轮且不自动续费。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
July 2026 Task 2 recalls
整理 2026 年 7 月近期公开雅思大作文考题回忆，涵盖英语授课、日常活动压力和公共场所手机使用三类题目。页面区分回忆题干与官方原题，列出题型判断、公开来源和可能的命令词拆解；每道题只提供审题与下一版主体段重写目标，帮助你练习立场、责任边界和展开链，不把考生回忆包装成已核实真题或任何形式的押题保证。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese sample essay problem
雅思大作文范文可以帮助理解结构，但照搬会掩盖自己的主卡分点。先用范文反查论证步骤。
Chinese Task 2 development
雅思大作文展开薄时，不要只补例子。先诊断 claim、reason、example 和 consequence 是否连成一条链。
Task 2 body paragraph
雅思大作文主体段要有清楚 topic sentence、reason、example 和回扣，不要堆多个半展开观点。
Task 2 score checker
雅思大作文评分应结合完整题目和作文，解释 TR、CC、LR、GRA，而不只是预测总分。重点检查是否回应命令词、立场是否稳定、主体段 reason-example-so what 是否展开，并引用原文证据。找到最影响目标分的一项后，把它转成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，再比较修改前后的具体变化是否清楚。
Stable Position
雅思写作 Task 2 评分的核心是 Task Response。想拿到 6.5 及以上，必须在炫技之前确保整篇文章立场绝对稳定。
Start diagnosis
Verify the issue with one essay first.
Put the prompt and essay into assessment and first check whether the topic material truly supports your point.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References