Banfen Writing
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Chinese writing problem diagnosis

A Task 2 outline should expose structure risk first.

Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through rewriting. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.

Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.

Common mistake

Many essays look off-task only after writing, but the outline often already shows incomplete answer scope.

Diagnostic evidence

If the two body paragraphs are only two examples without separate claims, the outline is not stable enough.

What to confirm before writing

Write question type, position, body 1 role, body 2 role, and one example for each.

What to revise after checking

Fix the outline before the essay. Move each paragraph from claim to reason to example.

  • Whether the full task is answered
  • Whether two paragraphs have roles
  • Whether examples serve claims
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时,band、错误清单和自动生成的范文只是表层。检查器应基于题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤;结果是学习诊断,官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique,用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链,避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板,而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场从开头的同意或反对开始,再让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据,再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Overclaiming
all、everyone、always 不是禁词,问题在于理由撑不住。这里给你三种收法:说清对象、补上条件、换更硬的理由,也提醒你别全篇都用 may。
Task 2 paragraph order
两个理由都不错,先写哪个?段落顺序乱,常常是因为每段要做什么没想清楚。给每段定一个任务,再写一句承接,顺序就清楚了。附一道排序小题。常见的原因有这几种:。
Chinese position drift
雅思大作文立场漂移常发生在 discuss both views、agree disagree 和金钱幸福题。先诊断标准是否稳定。先看原文证据,再决定下一步改什么。
Start practising

Check one real IELTS essay first.

Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.