Common mistake
An overly broad background sentence can make the introduction drift away from the prompt.
- Whether core nouns are kept
- Whether position appears
- Whether background is too broad
Writing step diagnosis
The job of the opening sentence is to enter the prompt, not show off expression.
Connect the sample, template sentence, prompt-analysis, logic, vocabulary, or grammar issue to one step that can be verified through rewriting. The point is not memorising one answer.
Chinese long-tail pages need concrete writing steps so they do not become thin content.
Diagnostic evidence
If the first sentence drops the prompt nouns, the essay often drifts.
What to confirm first
Circle the debated object, action, and limitation in the prompt.
How to revise the next version
Paraphrase the prompt in one sentence, then state position in one sentence.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese Task 2 introduction
雅思大作文 introduction 不只是改写题目。先保留限定词和命令词，再用 thesis 回答 agree/disagree、discussion、advantages 或 problem-solution 的要求。通过背景过大、立场模糊和范围漂移案例，检查开头是否为段落建立方向，并把主卡点转成可验证的开头重写。
IELTS Writing prompt paraphrase
雅思写作题目改写要保留对象、范围和评价方向，避免为了同义词而改变题意。先把问题拆成一个卡分点、一条诊断证据和一个下一版重写目标。问题越小，重写越容易真正聚焦。
Task 2 intro
IELTS Task 2 introduction 比 paraphrase 题目多一步。它应该让读者看到回答方向、立场范围和文章接下来会怎么展开。
Opinion essay sample
雅思大作文观点类范文要重点看 thesis、topic sentence 和 conclusion 是否保持同一立场。先写一句明确 thesis，并标出每段如何支持它。
Chinese Task 2 outline
雅思大作文提纲可以提前发现偏题、立场漂移和展开太薄的问题。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板，而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Overclaiming
all、everyone、always 不是禁词，问题在于理由撑不住。这里给你三种收法：说清对象、补上条件、换更硬的理由，也提醒你别全篇都用 may。
Start practising
Use one essay to locate the main blocker first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect criteria, essay evidence, and the next rewrite target first, then decide whether to train sample analysis, template sentences, logic, or language control.
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