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Writing topic breakdown

Health topics separate personal responsibility and public intervention first.

Turn topics, samples, materials, or prediction prompts into task reading, development, examples, and revision steps first. The goal is not memorising answers; it is writing your own next version.

A topic page is useful when it helps you write your own next version.

Common mistake

Putting all health problems on individuals ignores food environment, policy, and public cost.

Diagnostic evidence

If the paragraph does not explain why individuals cannot solve it alone, public-health argument is weak.

What to confirm before writing

Decide whether the prompt asks about habits, government policy, school education, or food industry.

What to revise in the next version

Write one personal-choice paragraph and one public-policy paragraph to compare responsibility boundaries.

  • Whether responsibility boundary is clear
  • Whether public cost is explained
  • Whether policy is executable
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改,才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
July 2026 Task 2 recalls
整理 2026 年 7 月近期公开雅思大作文考题回忆,涵盖英语授课、日常活动压力和公共场所手机使用三类题目。页面区分回忆题干与官方原题,列出题型判断、公开来源和可能的命令词拆解;每道题只提供审题与下一版主体段重写目标,帮助你练习立场、责任边界和展开链,不把考生回忆包装成已核实真题或任何形式的押题保证。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Health topic
IELTS Task 2 health topic 常见问题是把 lifestyle、tax、public health 混在一起。先诊断责任和证据。
Unhealthy food tax
不健康食品税题要诊断 price signal、consumer habit、fairness 和 health outcome。先做题目诊断,再写完整作文。
Fast food health
快餐健康题要诊断个人责任、政府政策和消费习惯,不要只写 unhealthy。检查重点:责任主体是否明确、健康后果是否具体、措施是否有机制。
Task 2 hot topics
雅思大作文高频话题适合整理观点框架、常见立场和可复用例子,但不能替代审题。先把话题、范文、素材或预测题转成审题、展开、例子和重写步骤。重点不是背答案,而是写出自己的下一版。
Task 2 ideas
雅思大作文观点应能回答题目、形成理由和例子。观点太多但不展开,会拖低 Task Response。列很多观点但每个只写一句,会让主体段缺少深度。
Chinese Task 2 introduction
雅思大作文 introduction 不只是改写题目。先保留限定词和命令词,再用 thesis 回答 agree/disagree、discussion、advantages 或 problem-solution 的要求。通过背景过大、立场模糊和范围漂移案例,检查开头是否为段落建立方向,并把主卡点转成可验证的开头重写。
Start practising

Verify the issue with one essay first.

Put the prompt and essay into assessment and first check whether the topic material truly supports your point.