What to confirm before writing
Clarify government action, beneficiary group, and cost source first.
Task 2 question-type decision
Government essays should explain public benefit and trade-offs.
Identify Task 2 command words first, then turn samples or templates into your own outline, body paragraph, and revision step. Question-type labels are useful when they clarify the answer requirement.
Question-type keywords are useful when they clarify the answer requirement, not when they trigger template copying.
Common mistake
Saying government should invest without explaining why it is government responsibility weakens the argument.
Prompt-analysis signal
Without taxpayer, public benefit, or opportunity cost, government arguments are often incomplete.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
How to revise the next version
Add public benefit and trade-off to one government spending claim.
- Whether government responsibility is explained
- Whether public benefit is specific
- Whether cost is considered
FAQ
What problem does Government sample solve?
Identify Task 2 command words first, then turn samples or templates into your own outline, body paragraph, and revision step. Question-type labels are useful when they clarify the answer requirement.
What evidence should I check first for Government sample?
Saying government should invest without explaining why it is government responsibility weakens the argument.
What should I redo after reading Government sample?
Without taxpayer, public benefit, or opportunity cost, government arguments are often incomplete. Add public benefit and trade-off to one government spending claim.
Is Government sample an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Task 2 question analysis
雅思大作文审题要先拆题型、命令词、讨论对象和限制条件，避免偏题和立场漂移。
Task 2 sample essay
雅思大作文范文要重点分析立场稳定、主体段展开和例子如何支撑观点。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Government topic Chinese
雅思大作文政府类话题不能只写 government should do more。先判断公共利益、公平、长期投资或安全风险是否需要政府介入，再写清资金或监管如何改变具体行为，并给介入范围补上限制条件。
Government topic
IELTS Task 2 government topic 容易写成 government should do more。先诊断政策目标、预算取舍和结果链。
Writing logic
雅思写作逻辑要看 claim、reason、example 和 implication 是否连成一条可证明的链。
Health essay
雅思大作文健康类作文要区分饮食、运动、医疗、税收和政府干预，避免只写 keep healthy。
Health topic Chinese
雅思大作文健康类话题常涉及饮食、运动、食品税、公共卫生、医疗成本与个人责任。先识别题目命令词、责任主体和受影响群体，再用清楚的因果机制连接政策、行为与健康结果。通过常见空泛观点和例子检查主体段是否真正回应问题，把最薄弱的责任边界或展开链转成下一版可验证的重写目标，并检查修改能否稳定服务结论并迁移到新题。
Start diagnosis
Turn the question type into a scoreable answer requirement first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect command words, position, body development, and scoring criteria first, then decide whether to learn from a sample, adjust a template, or rewrite a paragraph.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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