Diagnostic evidence
If an example is not followed by so this means or therefore, the paragraph often stops at listing information.
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
Task 2 examples must prove the claim.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.
Common mistake
A more specific example is not always better. Without explanation, it is only material.
What to revise after checking
After each example, add one sentence explaining how it proves the claim and what the result is.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to confirm before writing
Write claim and reason before choosing an example. Do not force a claim around a chosen example.
- Whether example serves the claim
- Whether mechanism is explained
- Whether consequence is connected
FAQ
What problem does Chinese Task 2 examples solve?
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
What evidence should I check first for Chinese Task 2 examples?
A more specific example is not always better. Without explanation, it is only material.
What should I redo after reading Chinese Task 2 examples?
After each example, add one sentence explaining how it proves the claim and what the result is. Write claim and reason before choosing an example. Do not force a claim around a chosen example.
Is Chinese Task 2 examples an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时，不要只看 band、错误清单或自动生成的范文。检查器应基于题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤；结果是学习诊断，不是官方 IELTS 分数。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。
Task 2 development
Task 2 分数卡住常见原因是观点没有发展成完整论证链。了解薄展开为什么压分，以及下一步该重写哪个动作。
Education thin development
一个 IELTS Task 2 education 常见写作问题：不提供范文代写，只展示主卡分点、证据和下一版修改目标。
Family essay
雅思大作文家庭类作文要处理家长教育、儿童行为、学校责任和社会影响之间的关系。
Globalisation essay
雅思大作文全球化类作文要分析品牌、文化、贸易、旅游和本地社区之间的利弊关系。
Government essay
雅思大作文政府类作文要解释政府责任、纳税人成本和公共利益，避免只写 should spend money。
Start diagnosis
Check one real IELTS essay first.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References