Common mistake
Writing only that people should protect the environment lacks execution path.
- Whether responsible actor is clear
- Whether solution is actionable
- Whether example is specific
Task 2 question-type decision
Environment essays need clear responsibility and mechanism.
Identify Task 2 command words first, then turn samples or templates into your own outline, body paragraph, and revision step. Question-type labels are useful when they clarify the answer requirement.
Question-type keywords are useful when they clarify the answer requirement, not when they trigger template copying.
Prompt-analysis signal
If a solution lacks actor and policy/action, problem-solution is thin.
What to confirm before writing
Decide whether the prompt asks about individuals, government, business, or global cooperation.
How to revise the next version
Write one environmental solution as actor-action-effect.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Task 2 question analysis
雅思大作文审题要先拆题型、命令词、讨论对象和限制条件，避免偏题和立场漂移。先把范文、模板句、审题、逻辑、词汇或语法问题连接到一个可重写验证的步骤。重点不是背一个答案。
Task 2 sample essay
雅思大作文范文要重点分析立场稳定、主体段展开和例子如何支撑观点。先把范文、模板句、审题、逻辑、词汇或语法问题连接到一个可重写验证的步骤。重点不是背一个答案。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板，而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Environment topic Chinese
雅思大作文环境类话题常见气候变化、能源、交通与消费。先区分个人、企业、政府和国际合作的责任，再用行动与结果写清环境作文的论证机制。话题页的价值在于帮你写自己的下一版。
Environment topic
IELTS Task 2 environment topic 常卡在 government、individual、company 的责任还要拆清。先诊断责任链再重写。
Problem solution sample
雅思问题解决类范文不要只背模板。先把 problem、cause、solution 一一配对，检查方案有没有执行者、动作和结果；再回到自己的原稿，只重写断开的那一组原因—方案。
Examples that do not support
举了例子，考官还是觉得论证弱？常见原因是例子太小、观点太大。这里有四个改法：说明机制、缩小观点、补一句回扣、删掉无关例子。常见的原因有这几种：。
Chinese general examples
雅思大作文例子太泛时，不要继续加长度。先诊断例子是否回到 topic sentence。问题通常不是缺一篇范文，而是还没看清自己的作文为什么一直被说不够清楚。
Start practising
Turn the question type into a scoreable answer requirement first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect command words, position, body development, and scoring criteria first, then decide whether to learn from a sample, adjust a template, or rewrite a paragraph.
References