Diagnostic evidence: repeated claim
If three sentences repeat the same claim with different words, development has not started.
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
Task 2 development is not making examples longer; it is connecting the chain.
Many body paragraphs have a claim and an example, but miss the reason and consequence between them. The reader cannot see why the example proves the claim.
Repair one paragraph first, not the whole essay immediately.
Common risk: isolated example
A story appears after for example, but it does not return to the topic sentence.
What to revise after checking
Label every sentence in one body paragraph. When two claims appear in a row, turn the second into a reason.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Check four steps in the body paragraph
Claim, reason, example, consequence. Add the missing step first.
- Whether there is a reason
- Whether the example returns to the claim
- Whether the consequence returns to the prompt
FAQ
What problem does Chinese Task 2 development solve?
Many body paragraphs have a claim and an example, but miss the reason and consequence between them. The reader cannot see why the example proves the claim.
What evidence should I check first for Chinese Task 2 development?
A story appears after for example, but it does not return to the topic sentence.
What should I redo after reading Chinese Task 2 development?
Label every sentence in one body paragraph. When two claims appear in a row, turn the second into a reason. Claim, reason, example, consequence. Add the missing step first.
Is Chinese Task 2 development an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
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These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Task 2 development
Task 2 分数卡住常见原因是观点没有发展成完整论证链。了解薄展开为什么压分，以及下一步该重写哪个动作。
Idea development
IELTS Task 2 idea development 的卡点不是没有观点，而是 topic sentence 后缺少 reason、example 或 consequence。检查观点如何被解释、例子为何能证明它，以及结果怎样回扣题目。定位最薄弱的一环后，只重写段落并对照证据，验证展开是否从泛泛陈述变成完整论证。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。
Chinese no ideas
雅思大作文没思路时，不要先背万能素材。先诊断题目冲突、立场和每个主体段要证明什么。
Discuss both views sample
雅思大作文讨论双方范文应分析两个观点、个人立场和评价标准，避免只罗列双方理由。
Education essay
雅思大作文教育类作文要先判断责任主体和教育目标，再选择课程、费用、家长或学生例子。
Education sample
雅思大作文教育类范文应分析讨论对象、责任主体和例子范围，避免空泛谈教育重要性。
Start diagnosis
Check one body-paragraph development chain first.
Submit one Task 2 essay and find the main blocker in body-paragraph development.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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