What to confirm before writing
Decide whether the prompt only asks pros/cons or asks whether one outweighs the other.
Task 2 question-type decision
Advantages-disadvantages essays should judge which side matters more.
Identify Task 2 command words first, then turn samples or templates into your own outline, body paragraph, and revision step. Question-type labels are useful when they clarify the answer requirement.
Question-type keywords are useful when they clarify the answer requirement, not when they trigger template copying.
Common mistake
Writing one paragraph for each side without weighing them makes the conclusion feel sudden.
Prompt-analysis signal
If the prompt asks outweigh, body paragraphs must show relative weight.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
How to revise the next version
Rewrite two topic sentences to make the weighting clearer.
- Whether outweigh is identified
- Whether weight is compared
- Whether conclusion is supported
FAQ
What problem does Advantages disadvantages sample solve?
Identify Task 2 command words first, then turn samples or templates into your own outline, body paragraph, and revision step. Question-type labels are useful when they clarify the answer requirement.
What evidence should I check first for Advantages disadvantages sample?
Writing one paragraph for each side without weighing them makes the conclusion feel sudden.
What should I redo after reading Advantages disadvantages sample?
If the prompt asks outweigh, body paragraphs must show relative weight. Rewrite two topic sentences to make the weighting clearer.
Is Advantages disadvantages sample an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Task 2 question analysis
雅思大作文审题要先拆题型、命令词、讨论对象和限制条件，避免偏题和立场漂移。
Task 2 sample essay
雅思大作文范文要重点分析立场稳定、主体段展开和例子如何支撑观点。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Advantages
IELTS Task 2 advantages and disadvantages 题不能只列好处和坏处。先判断是否要求 outweigh，再用影响范围、严重程度、持续时间或受益群体建立评价尺度。检查主体段的理由、例子、结果与结论是否完成权重判断；最后把最薄弱的一段收窄成可验证的重写目标，并对照原文证据。
Coherence logic
雅思写作连贯与逻辑的关键是段落顺序、指代清楚和信息递进，而不是连接词数量。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心不是观点数量，而是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Agree disagree sample
雅思大作文同意不同意范文要重点分析立场、让步和主体段是否都服务同一个观点。
Task 2 body paragraph
雅思大作文主体段要有清楚 topic sentence、reason、example 和回扣，不要堆多个半展开观点。
Cause effect sample
雅思大作文原因影响范文应区分 cause、effect 和 example，避免主体段方向混乱。
Start diagnosis
Turn the question type into a scoreable answer requirement first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect command words, position, body development, and scoring criteria first, then decide whether to learn from a sample, adjust a template, or rewrite a paragraph.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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