Diagnostic evidence
If verbs such as add, remove, replace, or expand are missing, map changes may be unclear.
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
Map tasks should be organised by change type first.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.
Common mistake
Describing point by point by direction misses the overview: what the place became overall.
What to revise after checking
Write two change groups: function change and location change, one comparison each.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to confirm before writing
Mark preserved, removed, added, and replaced areas first.
- Whether overview states the overall change
- Whether change verbs are accurate
- Whether location relation is clear
FAQ
What problem does Chinese map task solve?
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
What evidence should I check first for Chinese map task?
Describing point by point by direction misses the overview: what the place became overall.
What should I redo after reading Chinese map task?
Write two change groups: function change and location change, one comparison each. Mark preserved, removed, added, and replaced areas first.
Is Chinese map task an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时，不要只看 band、错误清单或自动生成的范文。检查器应基于题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤；结果是学习诊断，不是官方 IELTS 分数。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Map task
IELTS Task 1 map 地图题不应按方位逐个罗列建筑。先识别新增、拆除、搬迁、扩建和功能替换，再把变化按区域、时间或用途分组，概括整体规划方向。结合 overview、位置表达和比较句的常见问题，检查自己的报告是否遗漏主变化，并决定下一版先重写总览句、段落分组还是关键位置关系，再验证信息层级。
Map vocabulary
IELTS Task 1 map vocabulary 要先描述方位、替换、扩建、拆除和功能变化。
Chinese Task 1 template
雅思小作文模板只能帮你表达，不能替你选择 overview、关键数据和比较关系。
How to write map question
雅思小作文地图题要先看区域、方向、替换和新增设施，再概括主要变化。
Map sample
雅思小作文地图题范文先识别 before/after 状态和最大的空间变化，在 overview 概括整体改造，再按区域或变化类型分组，不要随机罗列设施。
Mixed charts
雅思小作文混合图、表格线型图组合题先找两图共享的对象、时间或地点，再判断解释、补充或对比关系。overview 同时覆盖两图，正文按信息关系分组。
Start diagnosis
Check one real IELTS essay first.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References