Diagnostic evidence
If friends, families, and colleagues are all written as people, the argument overgeneralizes.
Task 2 question guide
Technology communication prompts need the relationship context limited first.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Common trap
Only writing technology makes communication easier without explaining whether relationship quality changes.
What to revise after checking
Write one communication chain: tool -> interaction pattern -> relationship result.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt asks about family intimacy, work efficiency, social skills, or loneliness.
- Whether relationship context is clear
- Whether communication quality is explained
- Whether convenience and loss are compared
FAQ
What problem does Technology face-to-face communication solve?
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
What evidence should I check first for Technology face-to-face communication?
Only writing technology makes communication easier without explaining whether relationship quality changes.
What should I redo after reading Technology face-to-face communication?
Write one communication chain: tool -> interaction pattern -> relationship result. First decide whether the prompt asks about family intimacy, work efficiency, social skills, or loneliness.
Is Technology face-to-face communication an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
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These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Technology topic
IELTS Task 2 technology topic 容易写成泛泛的 modern life。先诊断立场、对象和例子是否贴题。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Media topic
IELTS Task 2 media topic 容易泛写 influence。先诊断信息来源、受众和行为改变。
Social media children
Social media and children 这类 Task 2 题目容易写成泛泛危害。先诊断 age group、platform use 和 consequence 是否清楚。
Technology replacing jobs
Technology replacing jobs 这类 IELTS Task 2 题目常在 efficiency 和 unemployment 之间摇摆。先检查立场和主体段职责。
Tourism local culture
Tourism and local culture 题目容易写成两边都有道理。先诊断收益对象、文化损耗和最终标准。
Traffic congestion solutions
交通拥堵方案题要诊断 government action、driver behaviour、public transport 和 pricing policy。
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