Diagnostic evidence
If friends, families, and colleagues are all written as people, the argument overgeneralizes.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with memorising a model essay. First decide who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Only writing technology makes communication easier without explaining whether relationship quality changes.
Write one communication chain: tool -> interaction pattern -> relationship result.
If friends, families, and colleagues are all written as people, the argument overgeneralizes.
First decide whether the prompt asks about family intimacy, work efficiency, social skills, or loneliness.
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