Common trap
Only writing cities have more jobs without consequences for rural areas or public services.
- Whether the migration motive is clear
- Whether city pressure is specific
- Whether rural impact appears
Task 2 question guide
Migration prompts need why people move and who carries the result.
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Do outline diagnosis before writing the full essay.
Diagnostic evidence
If causes and results are both vague, the essay reads like a common-sense list.
What to ask while reading the prompt
Separate cause, destination pressure, and origin-area effect first.
What to revise after checking
Write one migration chain: job gap -> worker move -> city pressure -> policy response.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
FAQ
What problem does Rural to urban migration solve?
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
What evidence should I check first for Rural to urban migration?
If causes and results are both vague, the essay reads like a common-sense list.
What should I redo after reading Rural to urban migration?
Separate cause, destination pressure, and origin-area effect first. Only writing cities have more jobs without consequences for rural areas or public services.
Is Rural to urban migration an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Urbanisation topic
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic 容易泛写 big cities。先诊断人口迁移、住房、就业和公共服务压力。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Work topic
IELTS Task 2 work topic 常见风险是把 remote work、job security、work-life balance 都写成泛泛效率。先诊断对象和因果。
Urbanisation vague problem
示范 urbanisation essay 把城市问题写成清单时，如何缩小到住房或公共服务压力。
School uniforms students
学生校服题要诊断 equality、discipline、identity 和 student expression。
Scientific research funding
科研政府资助题要诊断 public benefit、private profit 和 long-term uncertainty。
Social media children
Social media and children 这类 Task 2 题目容易写成泛泛危害。先诊断 age group、platform use 和 consequence 是否清楚。
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