Common trap
Supporting by market value in one paragraph and opposing by moral fairness in another without one position.
Task 2 question guide
Athlete salary prompts need the comparison standard first.
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Do outline diagnosis before writing the full essay.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Diagnostic evidence
If teachers, doctors, and athletes appear without a comparison standard, the position drifts.
What to ask while reading the prompt
Decide whether to compare by market reward, social contribution, or scarcity.
What to revise after checking
Write one stable thesis that names the salary fairness standard early.
- Whether the comparison standard is consistent
- Whether the market mechanism is explained
- Whether the fairness objection is handled
FAQ
What problem does Professional athletes salaries solve?
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Is Professional athletes salaries an AI essay checker?
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Guides
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These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Sports topic
IELTS Task 2 sports topic 常把 health、school、money 混在一起。先诊断目标、受益人和例子支撑。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique，用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链，避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Money topic
IELTS Task 2 money topic 容易从 happiness 写到 success 再写到 consumerism。先诊断立场和比较标准。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场不只是开头写同意或反对，还要让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Public art funding
公共艺术经费题要诊断公共收益、预算取舍和文化价值，不要只说 art is important。
Unhealthy food tax
不健康食品税题要诊断 price signal、consumer habit、fairness 和 health outcome。
Libraries and internet
Public libraries and internet 题要诊断 access、digital divide、community space 和 public spending。
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