Common trap
Supporting by market value in one paragraph and opposing by moral fairness in another without one position.
This IELTS Task 2 question does not need a memorised model essay first. The key is what the prompt compares, who should act, and what result the body paragraph must prove.
Do outline diagnosis before writing the full essay.
Supporting by market value in one paragraph and opposing by moral fairness in another without one position.
If teachers, doctors, and athletes appear without a comparison standard, the position drifts.
Decide whether to compare by market reward, social contribution, or scarcity.
Write one stable thesis that names the salary fairness standard early.
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