What to ask while reading the prompt
First decide whether the prompt asks about unhealthy food, toys, online ads, or parental control.
This IELTS Task 2 question should not start with a model essay. First check who the prompt concerns, what it compares, and whether it asks for cause, evaluation, or trade-off.
Diagnose the prompt before writing the full essay.
Only writing ads are bad for children without explaining persuasion mechanism.
Without age, product type, or parent role, advertising argument is usually too broad.
First decide whether the prompt asks about unhealthy food, toys, online ads, or parental control.
Write one advertising chain: message -> child desire -> purchase pressure -> social or health result.
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