Common risk
Saying partly agree in the introduction but supporting both sides separately can create position drift.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
Saying partly agree in the introduction but supporting both sides separately can create position drift.
If each paragraph cannot return to the same judgement, the clear-position signal weakens.
Decide completely agree, mostly agree, or balanced view, and write the judgement standard that will not change.
Rewrite the introduction and two topic sentences to check position consistency.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit an essay or outline to see whether the position stays stable through the conclusion.