Banfen Writing
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Chinese writing problem diagnosis

IELTS writing templates should support task reading and development, not write the answer for you.

Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through rewriting. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.

Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.

Common mistake

Universal templates are risky because they make different prompts look like the same essay, weakening task response.

Diagnostic evidence

If the same opening and body paragraphs fit another prompt, the template is hiding prompt differences.

What to confirm before writing

Write the task demand, position, and body-paragraph roles before choosing any fixed phrase.

What to revise after checking

Keep structure, not whole paragraphs. Reuse only one functional sentence at a time, such as concession, comparison, or summary.

  • Whether the template answers the prompt
  • Whether paragraph roles are clear
  • Whether whole-paragraph copying is avoided
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时,band、错误清单和自动生成的范文只是表层。检查器应基于题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤;结果是学习诊断,官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板,而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Chinese Task 1 template
雅思小作文模板只能帮你表达,不能替你选择 overview、关键数据和比较关系。如果去掉数字后文章仍然成立,说明它没有真正描述这张图。先圈出最高、最低、最大变化、共同趋势和异常点。
Model answer problem
IELTS writing model answer 搜索很容易变成背范文。本页说明如何把范文转成结构诊断和重写任务。从范文只提取一个步骤:让步、比较、例子机制或结论回应。
IELTS Writing time management
雅思写作时间分配通常建议 Task 1 约 20 分钟、Task 2 约 40 分钟,并预留检查重点错误。把时间都花在开头或高级词上,会挤掉主体段展开和最后检查。
Fix One Blocker
雅思作文拿到满屏批改意见却不知道从何下手?最有效的提分策略是一次只锁定一个核心卡分点进行定向重写。检查重点:不要被满屏的红色修改意见淹没、筛选出决定你目标分的关键障碍。
Topic practice
雅思写作话题练习不能只背素材。先把话题转成题型、立场、观点和例子。先把练习、评分、批改或工具结果接到一篇真实作文的诊断和下一版重写。入口越多,越需要一个清楚的主卡分点。
Start practising

Check one real IELTS essay first.

Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.