Common mistake
Writing only by intro-body-conclusion can ignore question-type differences and turn discussion into opinion.
Writing problem breakdown
The first step in Task 2 is answering the command word.
Break the problem into one blocker, one piece of diagnostic evidence, and one next revision target first. The smaller the problem, the more focused the rewrite becomes.
Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.
Diagnostic evidence
If the thesis does not directly answer the command, the body paragraphs usually drift.
What to confirm before writing
Circle command words, topic scope, position demand, and the two objects that must be answered.
What to revise in the next version
Rewrite the introduction and two topic sentences first, before adding advanced words.
- Whether the command word is answered
- Whether position is stable
- Whether each body paragraph has a task
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板，而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Chinese Task 2 question types
雅思大作文题型包括观点、讨论双方、优缺点、问题解决和双问题。先识别 agree/disagree、discuss、outweigh 等命令词与必须完成的任务，再决定立场与段落职责，避免把 discussion 写成单边 opinion，或让 solution 变成口号。提交题目与提纲后，诊断结构是否选错，重写关键步骤。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场从开头的同意或反对开始，再让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Chinese Task Response
雅思写作 Task Response 训练要先看回答范围、清楚立场、主体段展开和例子支撑。文章语言不错但分数上不去，常常是没有回答题目所有部分，或立场在主体段中变化。
Teacher correction
雅思作文老师批改应提供评分标准、原文证据和可执行的重写目标，避免只给笼统评价。先判断批改、修改、润色、评分器、老师批改、网课或卡分修复方案能不能给出可验证的诊断、证据和重写步骤。
Chinese writing template
雅思写作模板容易让作文变顺，但真正有用的是先诊断题目回应、段落职责和例子支撑。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板，而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Start practising
Use one real essay to find the main blocker.
Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.
References