Common mistake
Memorising long sentences without relationship control makes grammar complex but logic unclear.
Writing step diagnosis
Sentence patterns are useful when they express information relationships.
Connect the sample, template sentence, prompt-analysis, logic, vocabulary, or grammar issue to one step that can be verified through revision. The point is not memorising one answer.
Chinese long-tail pages need concrete writing steps so they do not become thin content.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Diagnostic evidence
If a pattern can fit any prompt, it is usually too empty.
What to confirm first
Decide whether you need cause, contrast, concession, or condition first.
How to revise the next version
Write one because sentence and one although sentence for the same claim.
- Whether relationship is clear
- Whether sentence is controlled
- Whether it fits the prompt
FAQ
What problem does Sentence patterns solve?
Connect the sample, template sentence, prompt-analysis, logic, vocabulary, or grammar issue to one step that can be verified through revision. The point is not memorising one answer.
Is Sentence patterns an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese writing grammar
雅思写作语法训练应先定位影响理解的高频错误，再练从句、比较句和让步句。
Chinese writing paraphrase
雅思大作文题目改写不只是同义替换。先保留限定词、讨论对象、强度和评价关系，再调整句式，避免 paraphrase 后偏题或改变立场要求。
Task 2 template sentences
雅思大作文模板句只能帮助完成开头改写、立场表达、转折或总结等具体任务，不能替代审题和观点展开。先写出自己的 thesis、topic sentence 与因果链，再判断一句模板是否准确承接上下文。若删掉后意思反而更清楚，就应去除；最后围绕当前题目定制重写，检查是否回应命令词、保留清楚立场且展开充分。
Writing software
雅思写作软件应帮助记录主卡分点、证据、短修复和重写变化，而不只是提供单次润色。
Chinese stuck at 6.5
雅思写作卡 6.5 时，先诊断反复拖分的卡分点：立场、展开、衔接、词汇准确性或语法控制。
How to write Task 1
雅思小作文怎么写，先判断图表类型与任务要求，再找主趋势、极值、交叉点、关键比较和异常变化。用 overview 概括整体关系，把两段细节按阶段或类别分组，并只选择能支持结论的数据。结合 Task Achievement、Coherence、词汇和语法证据，检查自己的报告最该重写总览句、数据句还是段落结构。
Start diagnosis
Use one essay to locate the main blocker first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect criteria, essay evidence, and the next rewrite target first, then decide whether to train sample analysis, template sentences, logic, or language control.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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