Common risk
Writing daily without review often repeats the same development, position, or grammar-control problem.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then revision; repair one step before writing the next essay.
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Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Writing daily without review often repeats the same development, position, or grammar-control problem.
If feedback cannot become the next revision target, online practice is only a submission record.
Prepare the prompt, essay, target band, and the paragraph you distrust most.
Complete one diagnosis -> revision -> compare cycle before moving to the next prompt.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get one clear revision target first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.