Banfen Writing
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Chinese writing problem diagnosis

Task 2 templates must be tied to question type and position.

Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through rewriting. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.

Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.

Common mistake

Using one structure for discussion, opinion, and problem-solution essays misaligns the answer requirement.

Diagnostic evidence

If the introduction does not answer the command word, the template may already be steering the structure wrong.

What to confirm before writing

Identify question type first, then write thesis, two topic sentences, and final judgement.

What to revise after checking

Write one thesis for the same topic under four question types to train structure switching.

  • Whether question type matches
  • Whether position is clear
  • Whether body paragraphs have roles

What templates actually do to the four criteria

A template only helps Coherence and Cohesion: a fixed paragraph frame keeps the structure complete. It cannot help Task Response — position and development must come from this specific prompt. In Lexical Resource, examiners recognise memorised language instantly; boilerplate passages do not count toward your vocabulary range and dilute the sentences that could show real ability. Many Band 6 essays fail not from lacking a template but because the template eats the word count that should answer the question.

  • CC: paragraph frames help; stacked linkers hurt
  • TR: position and argument come from you
  • LR: memorised language is excluded from your range

Compare: a template opening vs a scoring opening

Template opening: "With the development of society, the issue of X has aroused wide public concern." It fits any prompt, so its contribution to Task Response is zero. A scoring opening paraphrases the prompt and states a position: "Whether governments should fund space exploration while poverty persists divides opinion; I believe basic welfare must come first, though a small research budget is defensible." Similar length, but the second sentence already delivers position, scope, and a signalled concession. Test your own opening: would it still work pasted under a different prompt? If yes, it is not answering this one.

When to use a template — and when to drop it

Below Band 6.0: frame templates (four-paragraph shape, concession placement) genuinely stabilise structure. Aiming 6.5+: Band 7 LR descriptors ask for flexibility and less common items, and GRA asks for natural variety — both conflict with memorised full sentences. Keep only decision templates: position first, one idea per paragraph, and a conclusion that only sums up existing ideas.

  • Keep: paragraph roles, concession placement
  • Drop: universal openers, closers, linker lists
  • Check: can the sentence move to another prompt unchanged? Then cut it

Diagnostic signs of template dependence

Two signs are most reliable: the first 60 words skip the key concepts of the prompt (only abstract fillers), or the openings of your last three essays overlap by more than half when placed side by side. If either appears, use the next practice to rewrite the opening and first body paragraph of the same prompt until every sentence belongs to this question alone.

Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时,band、错误清单和自动生成的范文只是表层。检查器应基于题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤;结果是学习诊断,官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese Task 2 question types
雅思大作文题型包括观点、讨论双方、优缺点、问题解决和双问题。先识别 agree/disagree、discuss、outweigh 等命令词与必须完成的任务,再决定立场与段落职责,避免把 discussion 写成单边 opinion,或让 solution 变成口号。提交题目与提纲后,诊断结构是否选错,重写关键步骤。
Task 2 question types
IELTS Task 2 question types 要区分 opinion、discussion、problem solution 和 advantages disadvantages 的回答要求。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique,用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链,避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Task 2 template sentences
雅思大作文模板句只能帮助完成开头改写、立场表达、转折或总结等具体任务,不能替代审题和观点展开。先写出自己的 thesis、topic sentence 与因果链,再判断一句模板是否准确承接上下文。若删掉后意思反而更清楚,就应去除;最后围绕当前题目定制重写,检查是否回应命令词、保留清楚立场且展开充分。
Task 2 topic sentence
雅思大作文主题句不是段落标题,而是一个清楚、可证明、能回应题目的判断。先把问题拆成一个卡分点、一条诊断证据和一个下一版重写目标。问题越小,重写越容易真正聚焦。
Chinese topic vocabulary
雅思大作文话题词汇不是越高级越好。先诊断词是否准确服务题目、主体段和例子。问题通常不是缺一篇范文,而是还没看清自己的作文为什么一直被说不够清楚。
Start practising

Check one real IELTS essay first.

Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.