Diagnostic evidence
If the essay becomes clearer after removing a template sentence, it is a burden.
Writing step diagnosis
Template sentences should serve position and logic.
Connect the sample, template sentence, prompt-analysis, logic, vocabulary, or grammar issue to one step that can be verified through revision. The point is not memorising one answer.
Chinese long-tail pages need concrete writing steps so they do not become thin content.
Common mistake
Heavy generic sentences can make the essay vague and hide the actual answer.
How to revise the next version
Keep only one template sentence per essay and customise the rest around the prompt.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to confirm first
Write your own thesis first, then decide whether one template bridge is needed.
- Whether command words are answered
- Whether it is too generic
- Whether it serves the next sentence
FAQ
What problem does Task 2 template sentences solve?
Connect the sample, template sentence, prompt-analysis, logic, vocabulary, or grammar issue to one step that can be verified through revision. The point is not memorising one answer.
What evidence should I check first for Task 2 template sentences?
Heavy generic sentences can make the essay vague and hide the actual answer.
What should I redo after reading Task 2 template sentences?
Keep only one template sentence per essay and customise the rest around the prompt. Write your own thesis first, then decide whether one template bridge is needed.
Is Task 2 template sentences an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。
Chinese writing template
雅思写作模板容易让作文变顺，但真正有用的是先诊断题目回应、段落职责和例子支撑。
Chinese Task 2 introduction
雅思大作文 introduction 不只是改写题目。先保留限定词和命令词，再用 thesis 回答 agree/disagree、discussion、advantages 或 problem-solution 的要求。通过背景过大、立场模糊和范围漂移案例，检查开头是否为段落建立方向，并把主卡点转成可验证的开头重写。
Task 2 topic sentence
雅思大作文主题句不是段落标题，而是一个清楚、可证明、能回应题目的判断。
Chinese topic vocabulary
雅思大作文话题词汇不是越高级越好。先诊断词是否准确服务题目、主体段和例子。
July 2026 Task 2 recalls
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Start diagnosis
Use one essay to locate the main blocker first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect criteria, essay evidence, and the next rewrite target first, then decide whether to train sample analysis, template sentences, logic, or language control.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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