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Writing problem breakdown

What to do when Task 2 reasons are hard to find

All-purpose reasons can work once you reshape them to fit this prompt, so the examiner sees they answer it. A steadier route is to pull reasons from the prompt itself: who is affected, what it costs, and where it leads over time.

Fix one reason at a time so the next draft improves.

Common mistake

Turn memorised material into sentences that prove your point, so the paragraph argues.

Check the example

Does this example directly prove the sentence before it? Swap in one that does.

What to confirm before writing

Write the reason first, then pick a concrete scene that shows it.

What to revise in the next version

Swap one vague example for a concrete scene, then add one sentence on why it supports your point.

  • The reason explains the point
  • The example is specific
  • The last sentence returns to the point

Three ways to find reasons in the prompt

Sample prompt: Governments should spend more on public transport. Do you agree? Each tip shows the reason sentence only.

  • Change the person: what does this mean for individuals, families and the government? Pick the one you can make specific. Example: A bigger bus budget lets low-income workers reach jobs across the city on one cheap fare.
  • Ask about the cost: what money, time or chances does it take? The cost itself is a reason. Example: Every extra yuan for buses is a yuan taken from road repairs, so the city has to choose which trips matter most.
  • Look at time: where the short-term and long-term results differ is often the easiest reason to write. Example: New bus lines cost a lot in their first year, but they cut traffic jams for decades.

How to use all-purpose reasons

Keep a short list of reason directions: economy, health, efficiency, fairness. A direction is a starting point; the sentence you finally write should name the specific people or things in the prompt.

How to practise in Fogport

In the first Council level, "Only six budget slots", you make a choice in a concrete public decision, then write a few sentences on why. The reader's reply says what they understood, and you revise once more. Reasons that grow from your own choice fit the prompt better than memorised ones.

FAQ
Can I use all-purpose reasons in IELTS Writing?

Yes. Turn directions like economy, health, efficiency or fairness into a sentence that names the prompt’s people or things, so the examiner sees it answers this question.

Where do I start when looking for reasons?

Change the person: what does this mean for individuals, families and the government? Pick the one you can make specific.

How do I choose an example?

Pick a concrete scene that directly proves the sentence before it, then add one sentence on why it supports your point.

Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改,才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起,才能支撑论证。例子出现了,还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Chinese Task 2 examples
雅思大作文例子要连接 reason 和 consequence,避免只列名人、国家或个人经历。先写 claim 和 reason,再决定例子。不要先找例子再硬套观点。
Education thin development
一个 IELTS Task 2 education 常见写作问题:展示主卡分点、证据和下一版重写目标,范文由你自己写。这是一类常见写作问题的示例,供学习参考;雅思成绩以官方为准。
Task 2 sample essay
雅思大作文范文要重点分析立场稳定、主体段展开和例子如何支撑观点。先把范文、模板句、审题、逻辑、词汇或语法问题连接到一个可重写验证的步骤。重点不是背一个答案。
Task 2 sample essay analysis
雅思大作文范文分析不该停在高级词和漂亮句型。先检查 thesis、topic sentence、reason、example 与 consequence 是否形成完整链条,并观察每段怎样回应命令词和稳定立场。再用范文的结构证据反查自己的提纲与作文,定位最薄弱的审题或展开步骤,完成一次自己的段落重写。
Chinese sample essay problem
雅思大作文范文可以帮助理解结构,但照搬会掩盖自己的主卡分点。先用范文反查论证步骤。只背范文会让你以为素材够了,但自己的 topic sentence 和 example 仍然断开。
Start practising

Use one real essay to find the main blocker.

Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.