Banfen Writing
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Chinese writing problem diagnosis

When Task 2 feels idea-less, the first issue is often prompt analysis, not material.

Many learners look for templates and examples first, but the blocker is usually what the prompt compares, asks, and needs each paragraph to prove.

Turn the prompt into two paragraph jobs before writing.

Common risk: universal material

The more universal the material, the easier it misses the prompt. Task Response first checks whether this question is answered.

Diagnostic evidence: unclear paragraph roles

If Body 1 and Body 2 repeat the same idea, the issue is usually role assignment rather than a shortage of ideas.

Do a three-step prompt check first

Circle the topic, task word, and conflict. Then write one answer sentence and assign one proof job to each body paragraph.

What to revise after checking

Start with an outline; the full essay comes later. Write only an outline: position, Body 1 proves, Body 2 proves. Keep each item to one sentence.

  • Whether the task word is understood
  • Whether there is a clear position
  • Whether the two body paragraphs have separate jobs
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

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半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
No ideas
IELTS Task 2 思路卡住时,先拆题目,观点库和万能素材往后放。先拆清题目命令词、讨论对象、冲突关系、责任主体和回答要求,再把任务分配成明确的主体段职责。用 who、why、how、result 追问生成可解释的理由与例子,并检查它们是否真正服务立场;最后把审题或展开中的主卡点转成一次段落重写步骤。
Task 2 outline critique
IELTS Task 2 开写前先做 outline critique,用 10 分钟检查题目回应、立场平衡、主体段证据和展开链,避免写完整篇后才发现方向偏薄。
Education topic
IELTS Task 2 education topic 常见问题在于 reason、example 和 consequence 还要连成可评分的论证,观点往往是有的。
Technology topic
IELTS Task 2 technology topic 容易写成泛泛的 modern life。先诊断立场、对象和例子是否贴题。用自己的原文逐项检查,并把结论变成一次具体重写。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task 2 online correction
雅思大作文在线批改应先判断题目回应、立场稳定和主体段展开,而不是只改语法。先把练习、评分、批改或工具结果接到一篇真实作文的诊断和下一版重写。入口越多,越需要一个清楚的主卡分点。
Task 2 opening sentence
雅思大作文开头句不需要宏大背景、复杂模板或空泛的“当今社会”。先准确改写题目中的对象、范围和关系,再引出 thesis 与明确立场。结合常见偏题、过度概括和模板痕迹,检查 opening sentence 是否真正服务题目与后续主体段;提交题目和作文后,把最主要问题收窄成一次可验证的 introduction 重写。
Opinion essay sample
雅思大作文观点类范文要重点看 thesis、topic sentence 和 conclusion 是否保持同一立场。先写一句明确 thesis,并标出每段如何支持它。
Start practising

Turn the prompt into a writable outline first.

Submit your prompt or essay and diagnose whether the blocker is prompt analysis, position, or development.