Banfen Writing
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Chinese writing problem diagnosis

A Task 2 introduction must complete the answer requirement first.

Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through rewriting. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.

Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.

Common mistake

Only paraphrasing the prompt without a thesis leaves the essay without position signal from paragraph one.

Diagnostic evidence

If the introduction does not answer agree, discuss, causes, or outweigh, the later structure can go wrong.

What to confirm before writing

Write the command word, your position, and two body directions first.

What to revise after checking

Rewrite the introduction: sentence one preserves task meaning, sentence two answers it directly.

  • Whether task meaning is preserved
  • Whether command word is answered
  • Whether position is clear
Guides

Keep going with these guides.

These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.

Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局,从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关,进度自动保存;也可先做一道短练习,获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南:小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍,大作文题型、立场与主体段展开,以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时,分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时,band、错误清单和自动生成的范文只是表层。检查器应基于题目与原文,判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点,引用对应句段,并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤;结果是学习诊断,官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 2 intro
IELTS Task 2 introduction 比 paraphrase 题目多一步。它应该让读者看到回答方向、立场范围和文章接下来会怎么展开。
Chinese writing paraphrase
雅思大作文题目改写不只是同义替换。先保留限定词、讨论对象、强度和评价关系,再调整句式,避免 paraphrase 后偏题或改变立场要求。只改句式,不改核心名词和逻辑关系。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板,而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Media essay
雅思大作文媒体类作文要区分新闻、广告、社交媒体和儿童受众,并解释影响机制。先把大作文题材拆成命令词、讨论对象、责任主体、例子范围和可评分的主体段展开。重点不是背同一个万能素材。
Finding Task 2 ideas (Chinese)
雅思大作文思路卡住时,先审题,万能素材往后放。先诊断题目冲突、立场和每个主体段要证明什么。检查重点:是否看懂 task word、是否有明确 position、两个主体段是否分工。
Task 2 online correction
雅思大作文在线批改应先判断题目回应、立场稳定和主体段展开,而不是只改语法。先把练习、评分、批改或工具结果接到一篇真实作文的诊断和下一版重写。入口越多,越需要一个清楚的主卡分点。
Start practising

Check one real IELTS essay first.

Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.