Diagnostic evidence
Without public interest, fairness, or regulation mechanism, government arguments are weak.
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Only saying government should do more does not explain why markets, families, or individuals cannot solve it.
Write one because chain explaining why government is needed, then add a limit.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Without public interest, fairness, or regulation mechanism, government arguments are weak.
Decide whether the issue involves public interest, inequality, long-term investment, or safety risk.
Education, transport, or the arts do not automatically become government duties. Look for four signals: individuals cannot afford something that benefits society, markets exclude lower-income groups, returns take many years to appear, or a lack of regulation creates public-safety risk. Without one of these, “government should do more” is usually an empty position.
A weak sentence says only that governments should spend more on public transport. A developed paragraph specifies whether the money funds more frequent services or lower fares, which commuters change their choice, and how congestion or unequal access then falls. Delete the word “government” and reread: if the remaining sentences still do not show who does what and whose behaviour changes, the mechanism is missing.
Turn topics, samples, materials, or prediction prompts into task reading, development, examples, and revision steps first. The goal is not memorising answers; it is writing your own next version.
Only saying government should do more does not explain why markets, families, or individuals cannot solve it.
Write one because chain explaining why government is needed, then add a limit. Decide whether the issue involves public interest, inequality, long-term investment, or safety risk.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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