Diagnostic evidence
If the conclusion cannot explain why one side is stronger, clear-position signal weakens.
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
A Task 2 conclusion should prove position has not drifted.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.
Common mistake
A templated conclusion feels safe, but if the body has position drift, repeating the introduction cannot fix it.
What to revise after checking
Use one sentence to summarise the judgement criterion and one sentence to answer the prompt.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to confirm before writing
Check whether both body paragraphs serve the same final judgement.
- Whether it answers the prompt
- Whether position is closed
- Whether vague repetition is avoided
FAQ
What problem does Chinese Task 2 conclusion solve?
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
What evidence should I check first for Chinese Task 2 conclusion?
A templated conclusion feels safe, but if the body has position drift, repeating the introduction cannot fix it.
What should I redo after reading Chinese Task 2 conclusion?
Use one sentence to summarise the judgement criterion and one sentence to answer the prompt. Check whether both body paragraphs serve the same final judgement.
Is Chinese Task 2 conclusion an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时，不要只看 band、错误清单或自动生成的范文。检查器应基于题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤；结果是学习诊断，不是官方 IELTS 分数。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 2 conclusion
IELTS Task 2 conclusion 的作用是收束立场和论证，不是突然加入新原因、新例子或改变态度。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场不只是开头写同意或反对，还要让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。
Chinese Task 2 correction
雅思大作文批改应先判断题目回应、立场稳定和主体段展开，而不是只改语言。
Crime essay
雅思大作文犯罪类作文要看题目问原因、惩罚、教育还是预防，避免方案泛泛而谈。
Crime topic Chinese
雅思大作文犯罪类话题常考犯罪原因、惩罚、教育和预防。先判断题目要解释还是解决。
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Check one real IELTS essay first.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
References