What to confirm before writing
Turn the prompt issue into a cause list and an effect list first.
Task 2 question-type decision
Cause-effect essays need a clear direction of explanation.
Identify Task 2 command words first, then turn samples or templates into your own outline, body paragraph, and revision step. Question-type labels are useful when they clarify the answer requirement.
Question-type keywords are useful when they clarify the answer requirement, not when they trigger template copying.
Common mistake
Writing effects in the cause paragraph and returning to causes in the effect paragraph confuses structure.
Prompt-analysis signal
If the topic sentence lacks cause or effect signal, readers struggle to see the paragraph job.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
How to revise the next version
Rewrite only the two topic sentences so paragraph direction is explicit.
- Whether cause/effect are separated
- Whether examples support the direction
- Whether paragraph job is clear
FAQ
What problem does Cause effect sample solve?
Identify Task 2 command words first, then turn samples or templates into your own outline, body paragraph, and revision step. Question-type labels are useful when they clarify the answer requirement.
What evidence should I check first for Cause effect sample?
Writing effects in the cause paragraph and returning to causes in the effect paragraph confuses structure.
What should I redo after reading Cause effect sample?
If the topic sentence lacks cause or effect signal, readers struggle to see the paragraph job. Rewrite only the two topic sentences so paragraph direction is explicit.
Is Cause effect sample an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Task 2 question analysis
雅思大作文审题要先拆题型、命令词、讨论对象和限制条件，避免偏题和立场漂移。
Task 2 sample essay
雅思大作文范文要重点分析立场稳定、主体段展开和例子如何支撑观点。
Chinese Task 2 template
雅思大作文模板不能一套到底。先区分观点题、讨论题、问题解决题和优缺点题。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 2 topic sentence
雅思大作文主题句不是段落标题，而是一个清楚、可证明、能回应题目的判断。
Task 2 body paragraph
雅思大作文主体段要有清楚 topic sentence、reason、example 和回扣，不要堆多个半展开观点。
Chinese coherence
雅思写作连贯要先检查段落顺序、句间推进和指代清楚，而不是堆 however 和 moreover。
Chinese Task 2 conclusion
雅思大作文结尾应回到题目、立场和比较标准，避免只重复开头句。
Chinese Task 2 correction
雅思大作文批改应先判断题目回应、立场稳定和主体段展开，而不是只改语言。
Crime essay
雅思大作文犯罪类作文要看题目问原因、惩罚、教育还是预防，避免方案泛泛而谈。
Start diagnosis
Turn the question type into a scoreable answer requirement first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect command words, position, body development, and scoring criteria first, then decide whether to learn from a sample, adjust a template, or rewrite a paragraph.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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