Common mistake
Putting three ideas into one paragraph with one sentence each makes development thin.
Writing problem breakdown
A body paragraph should prove one judgement.
Break the problem into one blocker, one piece of diagnostic evidence, and one next revision target first. The smaller the problem, the more focused the rewrite becomes.
Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.
Diagnostic evidence
If the example is not explained as evidence for the claim, the paragraph is unfinished.
What to confirm before writing
Write topic sentence, reason, example, and so what first.
What to revise in the next version
Rewrite one body paragraph and merge half-developed points into one complete chain.
- Whether the topic sentence can be proven
- Whether reason explains cause
- Whether the example is linked back
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 2 development
Task 2 想提分，常见的关键是把观点发展成完整论证链。了解薄展开为什么压分，以及下一步该改哪个动作。检查重点：先写 claim、再补为什么成立、再用例子或结果把它撑起来。
Chinese Task 2 examples
雅思大作文例子要连接 reason 和 consequence，避免只列名人、国家或个人经历。先写 claim 和 reason，再决定例子。不要先找例子再硬套观点。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。例子出现了，还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Cause effect sample
雅思大作文原因影响范文应区分 cause、effect 和 example，避免主体段方向混乱。先把题目问题写成 cause list 和 effect list。
Chinese Task 2 conclusion
雅思大作文结尾应回到题目、立场和比较标准，避免只重复开头句。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板，而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Chinese Task 2 correction
雅思大作文批改应先判断题目回应、立场稳定和主体段展开，而不是只改语言。先把雅思写作问题落到一个可诊断、可重写验证的写作步骤上。重点不是收集更多模板，而是知道下一版先修哪里。
Start practising
Use one real essay to find the main blocker.
Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.
References