What to confirm before writing
Mark start, end, main stages, inputs, and outputs first.
Chinese writing problem diagnosis
Process diagrams start with stages, not passive sentences.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through rewriting. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.
Common mistake
Only using passive voice makes steps look complete while stage relation, cycle, and result remain unclear.
Diagnostic evidence
If the overview does not state stage count or whether the process cycles, summary is weak.
What to revise after checking
Write one stage group per paragraph instead of translating every label mechanically.
- Whether stages are grouped
- Whether sequence is clear
- Whether overview states process nature
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese AI checker
使用雅思写作 AI 批改时，band、错误清单和自动生成的范文只是表层。检查器应基于题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，并给出下一版可验证的重写步骤；结果是学习诊断，官方 IELTS 分数以考试为准。
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Process diagram
IELTS Task 1 process diagram 要先分阶段，按箭头写步骤只是第一层。先分阶段、找起点终点和循环，overview 才会清楚。
Process vocabulary
IELTS Task 1 process vocabulary 要先表达阶段、顺序、被动语态和循环关系。把流程图写成散点描述，会让读者看不出输入、转化和输出。
Chinese Task 1 overview
雅思小作文 overview 不是报最高最低。先概括全图趋势、最大差异和异常点，再决定哪些数字进主体段；适合 6.0–7.0 同学检查是否把总览写成了细节清单。
How to write process diagram
「雅思小作文流程图」不知先写哪句？先判线性/循环，圈成2–4个阶段，再用overview概括主线。写作游戏关卡对照漏步与散写，下一版只改阶段分组。
Process sample
雅思小作文流程图范文要示范阶段划分、被动语态和顺序连接，避免漏步骤或乱顺序。先数清步骤，按 preparation、processing、final output 分阶段。
Task 1 sample report
雅思小作文范文应重点学习 overview、关键数据筛选和比较关系，而不是堆图表词汇。先把范文、模板句、审题、逻辑、词汇或语法问题连接到一个可重写验证的步骤。重点不是背一个答案。
Start practising
Check one real IELTS essay first.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.
References