What to confirm before writing
Find overall trend, two largest contrasts, highest/lowest values, and outliers first.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
Diagnose one real essay first, then decide what to revise next.
Only writing highest/lowest or listing numbers turns overview into detail, not summary.
If the overview has no trend, comparison, or outlier, it is usually not summarising enough.
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Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Find overall trend, two largest contrasts, highest/lowest values, and outliers first.
Write the overview in two sentences: one trend and one major comparison.
Turn the IELTS Writing problem into one diagnosable writing step that can be verified through revision. The goal is not more templates; it is knowing what to repair first in the next version.
Only writing highest/lowest or listing numbers turns overview into detail, not summary.
If the overview has no trend, comparison, or outlier, it is usually not summarising enough. Write the overview in two sentences: one trend and one major comparison.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.