Diagnostic evidence
If a sentence reports only one number, it usually has not formed a comparison.
Writing step diagnosis
Comparison sentences should explain relationships between data points.
Connect the sample, template sentence, prompt-analysis, logic, vocabulary, or grammar issue to one step that can be verified through revision. The point is not memorising one answer.
Chinese long-tail pages need concrete writing steps so they do not become thin content.
Common mistake
Listing numbers one by one makes the body read like a list and weakens coherence and task achievement.
How to revise the next version
Combine two separate data sentences into one while or whereas comparison sentence.
Real IELTS essay diagnosis
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Main blocker
Body paragraph role is unclear
6–7conservative band range
268 words
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
What to confirm first
Split data into two groups first: similar values and the biggest contrast.
- Whether data is grouped
- Whether comparison word is accurate
- Whether it supports overview
FAQ
What problem does Task 1 comparison sentences solve?
Connect the sample, template sentence, prompt-analysis, logic, vocabulary, or grammar issue to one step that can be verified through revision. The point is not memorising one answer.
What evidence should I check first for Task 1 comparison sentences?
Listing numbers one by one makes the body read like a list and weakens coherence and task achievement.
What should I redo after reading Task 1 comparison sentences?
Combine two separate data sentences into one while or whereas comparison sentence. Split data into two groups first: similar values and the biggest contrast.
Is Task 1 comparison sentences an AI essay checker?
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，不要只看一个分数。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Task 1 comparison
IELTS Task 1 comparison 的关键是把相关项目放在一起比较。只按顺序描述每个数字，通常会让 overview 和主特征变弱。
Chinese line graph
雅思小作文线图写作要先识别总体上升或下降、交叉点、峰值、波动、平台期和最大变化段，再决定 overview 与主体段分组，而不是按年份逐个报数。标出起点、终点和变化幅度，用有限关键数据比较不同线条的速度与位置；写完后检查趋势词和比较句是否准确，把最像流水账的一段改成可验证的重写目标，并对照图表复查。
Chinese Task 1 overview
雅思小作文 overview 要概括主要趋势、最大差异和异常点，避免写成数据列表。
Chinese Task 1 correction
雅思小作文批改要先看 overview、关键数据选择和比较句，而不是只改模板句。
Data description
雅思小作文数据描述不是把所有数字依次写完。先从图表中选择主趋势、极值、交叉点、显著差距和可比较分组，在 overview 概括整体关系，再用有限关键数据支持正文。结合折线图、柱状图、表格和饼图常见错误，检查自己的报告是数据取舍、比较关系还是句子准确性最拖分，并确定下一版重写目标，验证证据变化是否改善。
Dynamic chart
雅思小作文动态图包含时间变化，写作时要优先概括趋势、阶段和变化幅度。
Start diagnosis
Use one essay to locate the main blocker first.
Submit the prompt and essay, inspect criteria, essay evidence, and the next rewrite target first, then decide whether to train sample analysis, template sentences, logic, or language control.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.
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