What to confirm before writing
Submit the full prompt and essay, and state your target band.
Writing problem breakdown
Chinese feedback should make score loss understandable.
Break the problem into one blocker, one piece of diagnostic evidence, and one next revision target first. The smaller the problem, the more focused the rewrite becomes.
Make the problem smaller first so the rewrite can actually focus.
Common mistake
Only translating English rubric terms still leaves the learner unsure how to revise the next paragraph.
Diagnostic evidence
Useful Chinese feedback connects terms to essay sentences and revision steps.
What to revise in the next version
Turn one issue in the Chinese feedback into a concrete rewrite task.
- Whether terms are explained clearly
- Whether evidence comes from the essay
- Whether the step is executable
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
半分写作是雅思写作练习网站。在雾港写作通关里选择 Task 1 来信或 Task 2 议事局，从自己的判断和短句写到完整作文。登录后免费玩 4 关，进度自动保存；也可先做一道短练习，获得点评并修改。
Writing guides
按正在写的题目查找雅思写作指南：小作文图型、overview 与数据取舍，大作文题型、立场与主体段展开，以及批改后的同题重写步骤。每篇指南都要求你回到自己的作文验证一个具体改动。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Chinese writing correction
雅思写作批改不应只改语法、替换高级词或给一篇标准范文。先基于完整题目与原文，判断 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响目标分的主卡分点，引用对应句段，再把反馈收窄成下一版可验证的段落重写目标。学习者自己完成修改，才能判断证据是否改善并迁移到下一篇
Chinese band descriptors
雅思写作评分标准包括 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 和 Grammar。重写时要先找主卡分点。
Chinese essay correction
雅思作文批改不要停在总评。先看四项评分标准里的扣分证据，再把反馈变成下一版重写步骤。有效批改会把一篇作文压缩成一个主卡分点，而不是平均点评每个句子。
Chinese essay feedback
雅思作文在线批改最怕反馈太泛。先看主卡分点、原文证据和下一版重写目标。只看建议列表，会让你同时改结构、词汇和语法，下一版反而没有重点。好反馈要能落到 修改步骤。
Online essay correction
雅思作文在线批改应先解释扣分证据，再给出可执行的段落重写步骤。修订后用改善、部分改善等五档结果说明目标问题发生了什么变化。围绕公开的修复目标重写目标段落，再用修改前后摘要核对结果。
Start practising
Use one real essay to find the main blocker.
Submit the prompt and essay, find the criterion that most affects the score, then decide which paragraph to rewrite.
References