Common mistake
An AI score without criterion breakdown is hard to verify and hard to turn into the next revision step.
- Whether four criteria are separated
- Whether evidence matches the essay
- Whether revision can verify it
Judge whether the tool result can become a verifiable revision step. The point is not a score promise; it is whether the result names the main blocker, essay evidence, and next-version target.
A tool becomes useful only when it connects to your next essay version.
If the AI number does not match essay evidence, trust evidence over the number.
Use the full prompt and essay so the model does not judge only surface language.
Break the AI score into four criteria and find the one to verify with a same-paragraph revision.
First of all, technology saves a lot of time in our daily life. For example, when we go to a new place, we do not need to ask people or remember the way, we just use the map App on the phone. Besides, we can pay by phone, buy things online and talk with friend…
Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
An AI score without criterion breakdown is hard to verify and hard to turn into the next revision step.
Judge whether the tool result can become a verifiable revision step. The point is not a score promise; it is whether the result names the main blocker, essay evidence, and next-version target.
If the AI number does not match essay evidence, trust evidence over the number.
Use the full prompt and essay so the model does not judge only surface language. An AI score without criterion breakdown is hard to verify and hard to turn into the next revision step.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get the main blocker, essay evidence, and next revision target.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.