Common writing problem

When a crime solution is too generic, add behaviour change first.

Sample issue: the paragraph says governments should educate young people, but never explains content, target group, or how crime decreases.

This is a representative writing problem, not a learner case or an official IELTS score.

Main blocker

Problem-solution development is thin: the mechanism between solution and result is missing.

Evidence signal

The same paragraph has education, police, and punishment, but none is fully explained.

Next revision target

Keep only education as the solution and add target group, lesson content, decision change, and crime result.

What to revise after checking

Label each solution sentence as actor, action, mechanism, or result. Add one mechanism sentence when it is missing.

Whether multiple solutions are stacked
Whether behaviour change appears
Whether the revision fixes one solution

FAQ

What problem does Crime generic solution solve?

Sample issue: the paragraph says governments should educate young people, but never explains content, target group, or how crime decreases.

What evidence should I check first for Crime generic solution?

Problem-solution development is thin: the mechanism between solution and result is missing.

What should I redo after reading Crime generic solution?

The same paragraph has education, police, and punishment, but none is fully explained. Label each solution sentence as actor, action, mechanism, or result. Add one mechanism sentence when it is missing.

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