Next revision target
Keep only education as the solution and add target group, lesson content, decision change, and crime result.
Common writing problem
When a crime solution is too generic, add behaviour change first.
Sample issue: the paragraph says governments should educate young people, but never explains content, target group, or how crime decreases.
This illustrates a common writing problem for study; official IELTS scores come only from the test.
Main blocker
Problem-solution development is thin: the mechanism between solution and result is missing.
Evidence signal
The same paragraph has education, police, and punishment, but none is fully explained.
What to revise after checking
Label each solution sentence as actor, action, mechanism, or result. Add one mechanism sentence when it is missing.
- Whether multiple solutions are stacked
- Whether behaviour change appears
- Whether the rewrite fixes one solution
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Home
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Crime topic
IELTS Task 2 crime topic 容易写成 punishment 清单。先诊断原因、责任主体和 solution 机制。solution 要有机制，不只是态度正确。
Crime prevention education
Crime prevention through education 题目不能只写教育重要。先诊断 risk group、school action 和 behaviour change。
Problem solution
IELTS Task 2 problem solution 题常见风险是问题写一套，方案写另一套。高质量答案需要问题和方案一一对应。问题和方案要成对出现。
Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Discussion one-sided
Discussion essay one-sided 示例诊断 both views 没有公平解释、个人观点突然出现的问题。带着自己的原文逐项检查，再用一次有目标的重写验证判断。
Education missing comparison standard
示范 university vs vocational education 作文为什么需要稳定比较标准。先改一段，不急着重写整篇。把最影响理解的一句改成可证明的因果、比较或取舍链。
Education thin development
一个 IELTS Task 2 education 常见写作问题：展示主卡分点、证据和下一版重写目标，范文由你自己写。这是一类常见写作问题的示例，供学习参考；雅思成绩以官方为准。
Start practising
Turn the solution into a revision target first.
Submit one Task 2 essay and get the main blocker, evidence, and next-version revision step.
References