Common mistake
Rare words with unnatural collocation weaken the Lexical Resource signal.
Turn the tool result into diagnosis, evidence, and the next revision step first. No official score promise and no ghostwritten answer.
Use diagnosis to decide what to revise first.
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Marked line: where the diagnosis located the main blocker in this learner-written essay.Coherence & cohesion 6
Sample diagnostic, not an official IELTS score.
Rare words with unnatural collocation weaken the Lexical Resource signal.
If the same broad words repeat, replace the function of the expression instead of mechanically finding synonyms.
Submit the full paragraph and prompt because vocabulary fit depends on argument context.
Repair one collocation group first, then replace one vague word.
Turn the tool result into diagnosis, evidence, and the next revision step first. No official score promise and no ghostwritten answer.
Banfen Writing focuses on targeted score-gap repair. Use a real essay to pinpoint your conservative band range, core blockers, text evidence, and next revision steps.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Submit the prompt and essay to get one main blocker, one evidence sentence, and one revision target first.
More than a simple comment list. Identify the priority blocker in your draft and guide you to revise with proven results.