Diagnostic evidence
If a body paragraph has only claim and example but no reason or mechanism, Task Response is usually unstable.
Identify where the writing step breaks first, then choose the next revision step. No model essay memorisation, and no generic correction list.
Diagnose first, then rewrite; repair one step before writing the next essay.
If each practice uses a new prompt without reviewing position and development, essay count grows but score-gap evidence stays unchanged.
Rewrite one body paragraph chain each time: topic sentence, reason, example, consequence.
If a body paragraph has only claim and example but no reason or mechanism, Task Response is usually unstable.
Confirm question type, answer scope, both sides, and final position first.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
Let feedback identify whether position, development, or examples hurt most.