How to make technology arguments concrete
Replace the broad topic word with a concrete setting: remote work, automated checkout, online classes, or AI translation. Clearer settings make development easier to judge.
Task 2 topic guide
Technology essays should not stop at convenience; they need to show who changes and how.
A common technology-topic trap is turning every point into faster, easier, and more efficient. That makes the paragraph sound generic and can blur the position.
Repair prompt-specific reasoning before polishing vocabulary.
Risk: stacking pros and cons
If one paragraph mentions convenience, job loss, privacy, and education together, it reads like a list instead of an argument.
Diagnostic evidence: the affected group is vague
When the subject is people, society, or technology users, the example often becomes empty.
What to revise after checking
Choose one technology claim and write one affected group, one change, and one consequence. Keep one impact per paragraph.
- Whether there is a clear affected group
- Whether the paragraph serves one position
- Whether generic technology wording is reduced
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Generic AI essay
IELTS AI essay sounds generic 的问题通常在于观点、例子和词汇偏离了具体题目，句子漂亮与否是其次。例子越万能，文章越像在空谈。
Task 2 position
IELTS Task 2 清晰立场从开头的同意或反对开始，再让 thesis、topic sentence、主体段理由和 conclusion 持续回答同一问题。通过 agree/disagree、discussion 与双问题题型识别立场漂移、范围过大或让步失控的原文证据，再把问题收窄成一次可检查的开头或段落重写。
Technology replacing jobs
Technology replacing jobs 这类 IELTS Task 2 题目常在 efficiency 和 unemployment 之间摇摆。先检查立场和主体段职责。
Technology unclear position
一个 technology essay 常见写作问题：当文章一边支持效率、一边担心失业时，先找立场和段落职责问题。Clear position 时好时坏：每段都像在回答不同问题。
Tourism topic
IELTS Task 2 tourism topic 常在 jobs 和 culture 之间摇摆。先诊断比较标准和因果链。如果正文没有说明就业、环境或文化哪一个优先，立场会弱。
Transport topic
IELTS Task 2 transport topic 容易只写 more buses。先诊断公共交通、私家车、拥堵和政策结果链。先诊断题目角度，再决定例子。
Urbanisation topic
IELTS Task 2 urbanisation topic 容易泛写 big cities。先诊断人口迁移、住房、就业和公共服务压力。
Start practising
Check whether the technology-topic position drifts first.
Submit one technology essay and find the main issue in position, example, or development chain.
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