Diagnostic evidence: examples have no actor
If examples mention brands, technology, and culture without changed actions by people or communities, development stays thin.
Task 2 topic guide
Globalisation topic essays need a clear affected group before examples.
IELTS Task 2 globalisation topic prompts often fail not because of missing ideas, but because global brands, cultural change, and individual choice is not turned into a scorable paragraph chain.
Diagnose the prompt angle before choosing examples.
Risk: scope is too broad
Globalisation affects everyone becomes word explanation if no affected group is named.
What to revise after checking
Write one impact chain: global force -> affected group -> behaviour change -> writing result.
How to break down this topic
First decide whether the prompt asks about culture, economy, identity, or consumer choice. Each needs a different actor.
- Whether the affected group is clear
- Whether cultural change is observable
- Whether the result returns to the prompt
Guides
Keep going with these guides.
These pages explain the Banfen Writing diagnostic and blocker-repair method, Task 1 overview, Task 2 development, and common score blockers.
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Writing checker
使用 IELTS Writing checker 时，分数之外还要看主卡分点。更有用的是找出 Task Response、Coherence、Lexical Resource 或 Grammar 中最影响训练的主卡分点。
Task Response
IELTS Task Response 的核心是完整回应命令词、保持清楚一致的立场，并把观点展开到可以评估，观点数量是其次。先拆出题目要求与对象，再检查 thesis、段落主旨、理由、例子和结果是否共同回答问题。引用原文定位遗漏或薄弱链条，把最主要的一处改成下一版可验证的段落重写目标，并记录前后证据。
Task 2 examples
Task 2 的例子要和 claim、reason、consequence 连在一起，才能支撑论证。例子出现了，还要说明它怎样支持前一句推理。
Culture topic
IELTS Task 2 culture topic 容易写成 tradition is important。先诊断文化变化、代际差异和具体例子。
Media topic
IELTS Task 2 media topic 容易泛写 influence。先诊断信息来源、受众和行为改变。这个观点太大，无法说明是改变消费、观点、学习还是投票。
Global brands local culture
全球品牌影响本地文化的 Task 2 题，要先诊断 brand、consumer choice 和 cultural habit 的替代链。
Globalisation broad example
示范 IELTS Task 2 globalisation 作文为什么例子太泛，以及如何把文化影响写成可证明链条。先改一段，不急着重写整篇。把最薄的句子改成可证明的因果或比较链。
Government topic
IELTS Task 2 government topic 容易写成 government should do more。先诊断政策目标、预算取舍和结果链。
Health topic
IELTS Task 2 health topic 常见问题是把 lifestyle、tax、public health 混在一起。先诊断责任和证据。
Housing topic
IELTS Task 2 housing topic 常涉及房价、城市规划和家庭生活。先诊断 affordability、land use 和居民体验。
Start practising
Check one argument chain in a globalisation essay first.
Submit one globalisation topic essay and find the main blocker in task reading, position, or development.
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